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Bad ass smile face.png Welcome. This my talk page (no shit). Discuss whatever you like but please follow the rules.

Rules

  • 1. No saying crap that doesnt make sense.
  • 2. Do not be an ass
  • 3. Be smart, not stupid.
  • 4. If I placed your article on QVFD and you get mad and want to say something horrible to me, don't even try. Cause I will likely bitch punch you.

More Serious Rules

  • 5. No vandlism.
  • 6. No flame wars.

Now that we tooken care of that, please enjoy!

Those who dare break the rules.........

VANDALISM!![edit | edit source]

ON WHEELS FUCK FUCK SHIT DICK RAPESir ¬_¬ | Banter HOMOPHOBE!!! CUN.png Icons-flag-us.png NOTM 00:44, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

You suck I hate you, HELPMESir ¬_¬ | Banter HOMOPHOBE!!! CUN.png Icons-flag-us.png NOTM 00:46, March 19, 2010 (UTC)
Hey, guys octopus shaboobala!Sir ¬_¬ | Banter HOMOPHOBE!!! CUN.png Icons-flag-us.png NOTM 00:46, March 19, 2010 (UTC)
/me moons your talk pageSir ¬_¬ | Banter HOMOPHOBE!!! CUN.png Icons-flag-us.png NOTM 00:47, March 19, 2010 (UTC)
Hey guys, what does "smart" mean?Sir ¬_¬ | Banter HOMOPHOBE!!! CUN.png Icons-flag-us.png NOTM 00:47, March 19, 2010 (UTC)
Something you'll never be?--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 00:47, March 19, 2010 (UTC)
Thank you, come again! Don't forget your change--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 00:49, March 19, 2010 (UTC)
Something horrible to me (That's for QVFD'ing that one article that time!)Sir ¬_¬ | Banter HOMOPHOBE!!! CUN.png Icons-flag-us.png NOTM 00:50, March 19, 2010 (UTC)
/me bitch punches you--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 00:51, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Directions: do you still read them?[edit | edit source]

Before you do something like this again, you might want to read the directions at the top where it says IMPORTANT. Thank you. King of the Internet Alden Loveshade??? (royal court)  02:53, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

As to your question, I do Pee Reviews, but not as often as I did before I was made head of IC. I'll check what's there now. King of the Internet Alden Loveshade??? (royal court)  02:54, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry I meant to go you rpage but I did not know what I was thinking. Sorry--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 02:56, March 19, 2010 (UTC)
As Gibbs says on NCIS, saying 'sorry' is a sign of weakness. With a name like Iwillkillyou you must show no fear of puny mortals like Why?, who you can crush under your boot heel and only by your good graces you let live. Now answer Why? with all the strength you have, and do it on his template again, which, of course, he made the mistake of creating. That template is an open invitation, use it well. Al en'chain 15:59 21 3
I bet you thought I wouldn't see this, huh, AiC? I'm gonna get you for that! (Also Happytimes told me how to help prevent the editing problem in the future. It was partially my fault, so for that I apologize to Iwillkillyouwhy?). King of the Internet Alden Loveshade??? (royal court)  04:38, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
Apology accepted--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 12:03, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
Apology accepted! Now is the time to, for example, fly the gay flag right in the middle of his template, or place whatever animal that eats code into it. I'd do it myself but I'm too lazy at the moment, and am in the middle of watching the third season of "Big Love", which I'll get back to momentarily. Good tv, that. Al en'chain 12:12 22 3 mmx

Thanks for the pee review![edit | edit source]

Hi, and thank you for the Unununium review. I've already changed it back to the 111th element, I had thought that because 119 hadn't been discovered yet it could go there, but you were right. I will work more on this page, and on your suggestions, soon, but wanted to thank you first. Um um um. Al in Chains 15:55 21 3 mmx

Your very welcome--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 14:09, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the BTTF Pee review[edit | edit source]

ok, so ive added some pics, and rearranged a few things, gotten rid of temporal displacement 2, and just made it 1 section. I'm completely at a blank as what else to add to the article, i could make things up, but the idea was to use things back to the future related or future related, and nothing new springs to mind. The skynet thing is just a reference to the terminator movies idea of the future, the Libyan terrorists is a reference to BTTF where doc says he built the time machine when Libyan terrorists wanted him to build them a bomb and he stole their plutonium, which is what got him killed, and the Family Guy thing I was originaly going to use Futurerama, but picked a cartoon more people would be familiar with BTTF references in the shows. --Maniac1075 04:35, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blue-ringed octopus[edit | edit source]

Much appreciated the Pee! It's always good to get others perspective. These creatures are ONLY terrible, and making them worse (in fact) than the Alien (max fiction), or any living thing, is my intention, because it's true. They are horrible 100%. But some people like it to sound like Wikipedia. I'm a long-time Wikipedia writer (long before I joined Uncyclopedia) and have lots of articles. BUT, they're not the least bit funny, even they are true (with references). As you give following example, "Also, I don’t think you should make the creature evil. Maybe saying something like ‘’it is a rather shy creature and will get quite aggressive if a stranger approaches’’ --- If I say ‘’it is a rather shy creature and will get quite aggressive if a stranger approaches’’ --- that is word-for-word Wikipedia fact, and Wikipedia just ain't funny, and neither is that fact. It's worse than Alien is funny (with reasons given). But some people want a Wikipedia article with a few jokes tossed in. But I save my Wikipedia style for Wikipedia, and here I'm Funnybony. I have read lots of features and find many to be boring long winded "content" - and we're supposed to be content free. I'm amazed also that many features are totally out of character, starting like, "Welcome!" and so I see nothing is sacred. So for me what I think is funny is to exaggerate, something I can't do in Wikipedia - not just repeat the literal boring facts, and say that is funny because it's true.

Anyway, the point is your review is much appreciated and I made lots of changes after reading it - down the list. But that you don't get the joke is sometimes unavoidable because of different tastes in humor. So I'm happy just to have an article stick even it doesn't appeal to everyone's taste. Like I find most features to be very polished blah - not because I never got one, but because they are just boring long-winded facts, much like a slightly tweaked Wiki article. So if that's the standard then I'll never make it -- I believe the less words the better and too choose wisely. I save my Wiki articles for Wikipedia - where life is so unfunny. Anyway, that review did indeed help in many ways. Thanks a bunch. Much appreciated. Cheers! BTW: If my controller (I'm a sock puppet of) MrN reads what I wrote here he'll give me a hard time, that I must read HTBFANJS (again..) But I'm just a his sock puppet, so I can't read!--Funnybony Icons-flag-th.png Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 01:56, Mar 24

Your welcome.--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 01:59, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Anti-ugly pill[edit | edit source]

Hi. Can I do a little copy editing of your page, not enough to take away the quaint language but to tone up a few things? Thanks. Aleister in Chains 2:05 24 3 mmx

Absolutely. If it would help the article then you can--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 02:12, March 24, 2010 (UTC)
Thank you, and I will send the cash and blood over posthaste. Give me about half an hour, or until you see a recent change entry, then you can check it out and keep/change. I do not want to change any of the tone, it's a good article. Thanks. Al, a few minutes later
There, some edits, and I added in a couple of jokes if you would wish to keep those. I like the page, and maybe some other editors would have ideas for it. Thanks for letting me play on it. Aleister en'chain 2:58 24 3 mmx
Your Wlecome. Thank for the edits. :)--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 10:08, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Discordianism vote needed quickly and member retirement[edit | edit source]

User:Why do I need to provide this?/Discordianism vote King of the Internet Alden Loveshade??? (royal court)  18:32, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Ok[edit | edit source]

PLEASE vandalize SPICE UP my page. But sign everything

Oky dokey! And next, try to remember to sign your signature--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 23:54, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

UnSignpost 25th March 2010 (hand delivered for added flavour)[edit | edit source]

--ChiefjusticeXBox360 22:42, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

need help[edit | edit source]

I see that on your userpage you have a smileyface where the potato should be. That image contains the key to unlocking the answer to my frustrations for the last few hours. How on earth did you get that transparent background on the image? I need to know so I can do that same thing with another image I'll be using to superimpose over the logo. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 22:17 EST 25 Mar, 2010

{{nologo}} :<span style="position:absolute;top:-40px;left:-150px;z-index:1;">[[Your image here|Your image size here]] </span> (Don't put an indent, I just did that so it wouldn't appear on the same line)
That should work. I answered your question in his place. I'm cool. ^_^Sir ¬_¬ | Banter HOMOPHOBE!!! CUN.png Icons-flag-us.png NOTM 03:48, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Currently working on Giant Panda[edit | edit source]

Here's an item left over from the garage sale, please sell it on E-Bay. Thank you very much for your vote, you were the first to do so. Appreciated. Aleister in Chains 22:49 28 3 mmx

I'm working and I'm about two thirds done. Thanks for your patience.Sir ¬_¬ | Banter HOMOPHOBE!!! CUN.png Icons-flag-us.png NOTM 03:50, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

You can't eat a pig panda like that all at once!  Avast Matey!!! Happytimes are here!* Happytimes.gif (talk) (stalk) Π   ~ Xkey280.jpg ~  26 Mar 2010 ~ 05:08 (UTC)
I'm done now, go see.Sir ¬_¬ | Banter HOMOPHOBE!!! CUN.png Icons-flag-us.png NOTM 01:59, March 27, 2010 (UTC)
Gee thanks!--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 23:17, March 29, 2010 (UTC)


UnSignpost 1th April 2010 - Always on time[edit | edit source]

Nominally Humane! some time Friday, 04:49, Apr 2 2010 UTC

In an attempt to curb the Pee queue in Cheif's absence[edit | edit source]

Your Cannibal Corpse untunes, I have left a message on there, that I hope you reply to, and I won't start my review until you do. ~Scriptsiggy.JPGPlease talk to me. Please. MUN CUN RotM 13:38, Apr 3, 2010

Potato head chopper of the Month March 2010[edit | edit source]

YO!

When I got the Nobel Piece of Ass Prize for being the Nobel Piece of Ass in appreciation of my saving the Universe, I was proud; but THIS is positively humbling! Thanks!!--Funnybony Icons-flag-th.png Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 20:17, Apr 3

UnSignpost 4/8/10 - Oh hi Signpost.[edit | edit source]

MegaPleb Dexter111344 Complain here 20:17, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Emo Girl[edit | edit source]

Hi. I didn't know you had emo up for review, and when I noticed Hiatus doing a spell check, I read it again and thought I'd go in and do some cleanup edits and nom it for VFH. Have really liked it in the past, and have thought to myself "Why isn't this a feature?", so this time I took it upon myself to edit and nom. I took out the Emo Girl Finder 500, which seemed to be thrown in as extra and threw me off the read; added a new almost-last line with a whore link to my article; and did some other edits. Please take a look at the changes and see if they are too much/too little. So it looks like I stepped on your and Hiatus' review. Yikes! Aleister in Chains 14:51 11 4 mmx

Thats fine, the changes are good. And I'm glad you nommed it, so thanks for both :).--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 00:50, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry[edit | edit source]

If you can't get anyone else to review your untunes, I'll do it by this weekend, if at all. In case you've missed the point, get someone else to review it. ~Scriptsiggy.JPGPlease talk to me. Please. MUN CUN RotM 11:10, Apr 14, 2010

UnSignpost 15/4/10 - Yet another on time delivery.[edit | edit source]

--ChiefjusticeXBox360 21:22, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Congrats, Emo is on main[edit | edit source]

Thanks for letting the ghosts hauntify the front page, they are very appreciative and will visit you tonight, when you least expect it, to thank you in person. Ghost train, Al des chain 22:29 30 4 mmx

Yay! Emo is on the main page right now. Nice work! Al en chains 11:08 16 4 MMX

Grats on your first feature, IWKY! Necropaxx (T) {~} Saturday, 08:02, Apr 17 2010
And you got the front page for two days in a row! Yay again! Al sans chains 14:32 17 4 mmx
Awesome!--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 01:12, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

UnSignpost 1 May[edit | edit source]

Brought to you by fucking magic. Sir SockySexy girls.jpg Mermaid with dolphin.jpg Tired Marilyn Monroe.jpg (talk) (stalk)Magnemite.gif Icons-flag-be.png GUN SotM UotM PMotM UotYPotM WotM 11:39, 1 May 2010

Pee Review: Don't Eat The Yellow Snow[edit | edit source]

Thanks for the constructive comments and the review. Seems like I have some work to do, but know that I know which way I'm going with it it should be rater straightforward. Thanks again--Striker2117 03:23, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

No problem. :)--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 05:49, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

I just finished reworking the article around. I realize that you are one heck of a busy person, but if you have some spare time at some point, I would appreciate it if you would glance over it again and leave comments about it on my talk page. No hurry though, don't want to rush you.--Striker2117 05:03, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

I'll take at look at it probaly by tomarrow morning, though I'm already interested with the fact you said that you worked on it some.--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 06:10, May 2, 2010 (UTC)
Cool, I realize that you have tagged a few other PEEs, have a life outside of here, and seem to be rather busy; so whenever it's convenient.--Striker2117 06:37, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

To arms![edit | edit source]

Good day loyal Peeing member, the management was wondering if you had noticed the state of the toilet recently, if not, why not? This is a call to you, as one of our better active reviewers, for a couple of reviews from you over the next few days. The queue is in the worst state it has been in for a little while and I would really appreciate you taking the time to do a couple of reviews. If you are able to help out then please review the older requests first.

What else do you need to hear? Get pissing! --ChiefjusticeXBox360 15:18, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Buffalo[edit | edit source]

This is now in your userspace as the construction tag on it had expired, and it doesn't look ready for mainspace yet. I thought userspacing it was a better alternative to deletion, if there is an issue with this then you just have to let me know. --ChiefjusticeXBox360 18:10, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Same thing with this article now. --ChiefjusticeXBox360 09:58, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

The Annoying Orange[edit | edit source]

BRAVO! My son's fav show. Don't forget that all the veges he bugs get sliced. And he a racist! Looking forward to vote on the finished job. Super. Cheers!--Funnybony Icons-flag-th.png Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 19:13, Jun 2

Thanks, I'll be sure to add those in.--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 18:33, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Final warning[edit | edit source]

The next review you book and fail to complete within 12 hours without an explanation will get you a week off. You have had too many warnings for anything else to be suitable. --ChiefjusticeXBox360 14:33, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

You better rephrase that[edit | edit source]

Sorry for this, but most of the humor here sucked big blue whale balls that are covered with bitter tasting sprinkles of epic fail drenched in pools of liquid elephant shit mixed with the face of Lady Gaga. Even if it's a joke, that's just bound to cause trouble.--Sir HELPME Talk (more? --> CUN ROTM NOTM Pleb USS Pees SK ) On Monday, 05:24, June 21 2010 UTC

I fixed the problem. I really didn't see it like that, so thanks for pointing that out--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 05:33, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you for taking the time to review the article. Now, I don't normally like to rip a reviewer's head off, but it is clear that you have no idea what I was writing an article about, despite the fact that I provided a wiki link for you to familiarise yourself, and asked for someone with a prior knowledge of the subject. So here goes. There is a Bob Dylan nonsense song called Queen Jane Approximately. Each verse of this song begins with a situation: "When your mother sends back all your invitations" etc. The article has a repetitive form because it follows the song's verses. The section headings take the form they do because they are taken almost verbatim from the lyrics. So what I was doing was to imagine what a real queen, a nasty queen, would do in response to these situations. So that's the concept.

As for humour: complete randomness was not the approach that I was taking. The situations to which this person was responding are previously defined. It must have been clear that I wasn't writing a treatise about what Chuck Norris did to Robot Hitloprah in 99938943 BC on Uranus. Or, at least, it should have been to anyone who had bothered to find out what I was writing about. This article is about the Bob Dylan song, you just didn't know it. I discussed the repetitive format above.

By no means am I claiming to have written the perfect article. I've written plenty of stinkers on this site. Particularly, I accept that profanity can get tiresome, and I appreciated your comments on that matter. But even if you did have any idea what I was talking about, and your review was exactly the same as a result, it was still a waste of your time, and mine. Why? Well, you give no advice whatsoever as to what I should do. The review concludes with the advice that I rewrite the article but keep the images. There's no suggested direction given. Essentially, the review amounted to "you've done it all wrong" with no suggestions as to how I would do it right. But, of course, I should keep the images, even if they don't relate to the new concept, whatever that may be. The idea behind Pee Review is constructive criticism, unless the article is some completely lost cause. Here, you haven't helped, assisted, advised, with any kind of direction. I'm not angry, just disappointed.

I've made a genuine effort here, and you've responded with a half-arsed attempt to tear me down. Utterly unimpressive. I see that only 58% of your reviews are considered to be "in-depth". Frankly: if the rest of your reviews are this useless, I fear that all you're doing is wasting electrons. I'll be quite disappointed if this review is considered to be an in-depth one. Forgive me my rudeness here, and I'll forgive yours. IronLung 23:02, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, I am angry. IronLung 23:11, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

To anybody who reads the message above, this issue has been sorted out on IronLung's talk page. Please refrain from saying anything negative about the issue above, and anybody who does will be deleted on sight. There is no need for you to make this an even bigger issue than it already was. I made a mistake, he got mad, I apologized, he did so as well we made up, case close.

Now that I got that out, please continue to send messages under this statement. Thanks.--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 03:59, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Good to "see" you[edit | edit source]

Hi, and it's nice to see you back again. The place wasn't the same without you, going to hell in fact, but now things seem to have evened out. Keep on rippin' and trippin'. Aleister 4:19 22 6 MMX

Thank You. It's good to be back.--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 04:30, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for peeing on me[edit | edit source]

Thanks, IWilly for peeing on my Gynecologist. I've taken your advice and changed/added a few parts here and there as you suggested. I kinda want to keep the strikes tho, it's supposed to represent not being able to spell Gynecologist, so the struck out words are supposed to be attempts at spelling it... tho, in future i may make it an animation to make it clear what it was I was going for... dunno if you have seen Hot Shots 2, but they do the gag at the start of the film, it may work better that way. And as for your question, yes, I did add the Proofread myself, as all my articles need it, as I only have a small vocabulary 'cause my dictionary is so small. I should probably change my name to "Small dicked man who cant spell". Thanks again :) --ManiacJaSg.gif-Maniac1075Complain Here 07:07, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Your welcome. I do like the changes you have made, and it's good that you put the proofread there. Now you don't have to worry about spelling.--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 15:47, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks and stuff[edit | edit source]

Stalking.jpg John Lydon
has been watching you and noticed you voted for Stalker to be Featured.

Now he doesn't have to kill you.

For you[edit | edit source]

Goldurinal.gif
Golden Urinal

You have been awarded this coveted Golden Urinal in recognition of having completed over 25 in-depth pee reviews. Thanks for the hard work.
Now have a rehydrating drink, and get back to pissing there are still articles out there that need your help, dammit!


Keep the in-depth reviews going. --ChiefjusticeXBox360 11:53, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Why, thank you very much--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 16:57, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the review of Saki[edit | edit source]

Did you spot my sad attempts at epigram making? Probably not. I blame my non-British heritage. They're supposed to be funny one or two liners that can be lifted and quoted at random, usually without further expansion in the text itself. All the humour is supposed to be contained in the two lines and after you read it, it's supposed to be like "Bam!" - deep and funny! The kind of thing that Oscar Wilde and Saki are famous for. But... if they're not funny... they're not really epigrams then... and it took me ages to come up with them. Oh well. Any other advice in terms of humour, besides more expansion? ~Scriptsiggy.JPGPlease talk to me. Please. MUN CUN RotM09:44, Jun 24, 2010

The UnSignpost Is Not Dead![edit | edit source]

A new UnSignpost issue, another template spammed onto your talkpage, enjoy! Sir SockySexy girls.jpg Mermaid with dolphin.jpg Tired Marilyn Monroe.jpg (talk) (stalk)Magnemite.gif Icons-flag-be.png GUN SotM UotM PMotM UotYPotM WotM 16:17, 24 June 2010

review[edit | edit source]

I got the pages from the request page. as far as the lightbulb one is concerned my aim was too keep it simple. it was making fun of a D.I.Y. article i actually found. they seriously had instructions for this.

Ok I think it can now be reviewed now. Also remember to sign next time.--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 01:19, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the great review of UnNews:Warrant sent out for the arrest of the Wonderpets[edit | edit source]

As is the case for most reviews I receive, I take a pretty good chunk of the criticism and use it, although usually not 100%. I really appreciate your feedback, and I think many of your ideas will be very effective. Unfortunately, a personal weakness of mine is photoshop. It always has been. I just don't understand the programs enough to use them properly. That all said, thanks for everything. I give you a thumbs up for reviewing. User:Mrthejazz/sig 01:30, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Anytime. I'm glad that you found my advice helpful and I'm looking forward to the changes. And I understand the whole photoshop thing; I'm not good at it either. XD--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 01:35, June 25, 2010 (UTC)
Alright, I've made some changes. Feel free to tell me what you think.User:Mrthejazz/sig 03:39, June 25, 2010 (UTC)
Much better. I see you actually took the time to make changes, and use the ideas I gave you. Keep up the good work! Cheers!--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 04:35, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Review.[edit | edit source]

Many thanks for your review of UnTweets, clear-eyed Iwillkillyou333. Thanks for pointing out the "I've" thing; i've never been very good at capitalization. I will disagree with one bit, however. The idea of Twitter is that it's supposed to be 140 characters or less, so I couldn't really expand any of the jokes into a paragraph. Thanks for the advice on the images; i'll try to add a few more. Saberwolf116 13:31, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Article[edit | edit source]

I moved your article to UnNews:Zombies getting fat, junk food-eating humans to blame because periods shouldn't be in article titles. Just letting you know.--Sir HELPME Talk (more? --> CUN ROTM NOTM Pleb USS Pees SK ) On Friday, 06:28, June 25 2010 UTC

Huh, I didn't that fact, but thanks for the move.--Grue ApocalypseDirectorEye 4.gifWILLExplode 3.GIFYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 18:31, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Claire[edit | edit source]

Hi, glad to help. I did some edits and a few additions, but didn't make any large changes. It was a fun read, and she is a sexy moving vid (I watched the YouTube imbed, pretty funny). But like the Godfather of yore, I will come back tomorrow and ask a price for my task. Ya ha ha, ya ha ha. By the way, I enjoyed your comments on the recent wikia forums, and all I can say is I love wikia, and if wikia's executives were in front of me now I would say to them: Good work, wikia executives. Forum on! Aleister 11:58 26 6 MMX