User:Aleister/archive3

In case you don't see my SF Pee Review note

Please see here and let me know what you think. King of the Internet Alden Loveshade??? (royal court)  19:46, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Laotian help

Also if you'd like someone to take that Laotian girl off your hands for a while, feel free to let me know. I'd be happy to let her be on my hands. King of the Internet Alden Loveshade??? (royal court)  19:49, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reinvent the wheel

Hi Al, I just read the above article carefully. Concept wise it's the best I ever heard of, the freakin' wheel... in a time when only the reader knows what a wheel is. My only question is how did he (reader) manage to go back in time? It's kinda like In-A-Gadda-Da-Vida was without the very song of title, then you added the song, the band, and your insider explainations. Or Parting the Red Sea needed a "reason." If nobody wants to review Wheel, or if you would like me to do it, I'll be glad to review it, because near perfect articles are the most easy to review. When a story is well considered it leaves very little to fix, if any. Whattya say? Cheers!--Funnybony    21:39, May 24

Hi. There is no explanation. When you wake up in an alternative reality, there you are. You just wake up there. Changing timestreams without a horse. Sailing the ocean of now and ending up WOW! He just switched timestreams while he was asleep. Maybe I should put some wikipedia links to alternative realities, or a sentence or two describing the physics or theories behind them. And sure, if you'd like to review it, but please find faults in it and kick my ass. You did find some very serious faults with the James Bevel article, and helped with its form now and hopefully in the future. So as long as you kick me upside the head on the page, appreciated, and thank you. Al sans chains 00:10 25 5 MMX

;)

Hey.

Well, I'm quite often around, not always editing and not always logged due to laziness ;). And I'm happy you are happy when you see me ;). And no, seems like you didn't edit the page referenced in my discussion. Anyway, it also seems it's a bit late for featuring this material.

I reduced my activity here due to language barrier. I can speak or write reasonably well but my efforts are still depreciated by some people here and it's not nice. So that's why I avoid writing here too much. There are always problems with proofreading etc. (And I became an admin on Polish Uncy ;p (Finally but I'm no longer interested in any adminish work there :P. They just gave me that function for lulz).

By the way, how many features did you get during last 3 weeks? ;). Sir Ptok-Bentoniczny^{Pisz tutaj} • KUN 00:30, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Congratulations on the admin post on Polish Uncy! Nice work. Now I can ask you too, do you have someone who can translate the Mortal Sin page and post it on Polish Uncy? A nice catholic country likes yours would just love that page, photocopy thousands of copies, and pass them out on the streets. Is there a translator there? Thanks. On your pages here, I'd be happy to proofread one of them for language and commas and stuff, not for content as much as to English-ize it. Then maybe other people would volunteer to do one apiece. You write very well for someone whose first language isn't English, and you've added valued material to the site. As for my features, alas, I've had none featured for a month or so. If you want to nominate one or two, please do so, to get me at least one feature. Not many ready right now though. Thanks again, and enjoy the admin post (hey. you can ban Mordillo from Polish uncy!) Al 00:39 25 5 mmx

Thanks. Well, I believe I could translate Mortal Sin to Polish after exams (in about 2-3 weeks). If you want proofread m article, you don't have to ask, just do, and I will be happy with it. (and thanks for info about Mordillo ;D). Cheers Sir Ptok-Bentoniczny^{Pisz tutaj} • KUN 12:14, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

VFD

If your question in VFD just now relates to the new voting format, I asked the same thing on the VFD talk page...and got nowhere. Spıke ¬ 01:49 25-May-10

I figured I'd just ignore it and go on as before. I liked the informal feeling there, and how people communicated within that format. Different than VFH, and it was a good difference. Al des chains 1:59 25 5 MMX

Recording DKW

I'll do it some time tonight or during the day tomorrow. Any particularly vocal directions you want to give me? It helps the voice actor quite a bit. MegaPleb • Dexter111344 • Complain here 00:13, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Cool. Maybe when you do the photos you can describe them in a normal voice, then read the captions in the voice that you pick for the page. There are the obvious places where it's a more heady feeling, like when the narrator talks about her tongue ring, and her being six foot tall and red-headed! Like WOW, can you believe this woman exists! Then the last section, the academic conference, you can read more seriously, like a news narrator. Make sense? Do you practice once or twice before recording, or do you record a few and then pick the best version? I've never done a reading like this myself, at least not for internet upload. It'll be great fun to hear! Thanks for the heads up too (that's what she says to Dennis) Al 00:19 26 5 mmx

To answer you about my process, I do all recordings in one single shot and fuck up in all of them so I then start off on tangents and singing. By the time I'm done recording, I have two recordings that are complete and I pick which of the two is the least crap. MegaPleb • Dexter111344 • Complain here 20:29, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Science Fiction Pee Review

I Pee Reviewed Uncyclopedia:Imperial Colonization/project aka Science Fiction based on version 4563018 of 15:20, May 24, 2010. I hope this helps! King of the Internet Alden Loveshade??? (royal court)  05:44, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Don't be a Dick

that rule doesn't work when the OP is being a dick themselves, additionally that whining template should serve to demonstrate the OPs behaviour, if it provokes them, that is their issue and simply demonstrates they're not interested in a proper discussion -- Prof. Olipro KUN (W)Anchor Op Bur. (Harass) 01:45, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

The template was used and discussed recently. Whining is in the eye of the beholder. I will whine now to show you what I consider whining: I say, my good man, is the present discussion under review being held without a serving of tea and almond cookies? Al few minutes later

Voidism feature

Dude! You're on such a roll! Even you simply "Nom" an article and it gets featured. Awesome! Al, I want to thank you and the other voters. Where can I find the old voting page for Voidism? I looked around quite a bit without success. The Void is thankful. And 'thankful void' is the best kind. Cheers!--Funnybony    07:01, May 27

Infinite thanks from the void.

When the void calls, nobody hears. When the void spends money, no goods are acquired. The void has no hopes and no complaints. The voters for the void can be found right here, in the void. no-Aleister no-in no-chains 11:16 27 5 MMX

Oh, thank what's his name! OK, I think I got every one covered. That article Voidism has been up for a couple years, but it took you and MrN to hone it down and also teach me how to write more suitable for VFH. So Voidism is a joint effort as well as a long-time in the making. BUT, you, jeez, how many features this month? Man you think faster and are more creative than anyone I've seen. People complain on Pee because your too prolific. Duh! That's a real-bad problem, huh? But, it spite of all the page that should be your BEST article is not yet up to par. But will be shortly. BTW: You said, "When the void spends money, no goods are acquired", and organized religion says, "When the void receives money, many goods are acquired!" Cheers and much thanks!--Funnybony    21:10, May 27

The FAT lady sang?

Dude. I've done a lot, a LOT, of work on this post-apocalypse December 22, 2012. Maybe you can figure out what's deficient or excessive. It needs to be totally serious sounding, in a very British, upper crust, manner. Any hope? I know this might be a bit soon, but I'm never sure about tomorrow, so no time like the present. Cheers--Funnybony    21:50, May 27

Will take a look at some point soon. Thanks for all the silly statements above, you must be drinking some of that Thai juice again. And yes, my best page, People Who Like to Fuck Naked, will keep on improving. I've figured out a way to make the opening and an opening picture family friendly, so friendly that a seven-year-old child could enjoy seeing it. As for the 2012 page, you have over two years to finish it! Al des chains 00:23 28 5 MMX

HowTo:Disperse an angry mob of protesters

Al, dude! I just got a helpful and inspiring Pee Review on this article, which I have greatly improved and expanded. The article flowed as a result of recent experiences where I am now. As for the start picture, I intentionally give away the punch line because the article is more funny to read if you know where it's headed. Do think it's good enough for me to Nom now? I gotta follow your example. Who has time to wait. Hehe! Cheers!--Funnybony    20:15, May 28

Hi. It seems like more work is needed, take a bit more time on this one and it should be better. Lots of random names in there. Give the tea some time to boil. Let the page find its soul-mate. Don't let the sun tell you which way is up. Fry the beans before tasting the batter. That is all. Al des chains 3:02 29 5 MMX

Wizard of Aus

Good advice. I may leave it for a while and think of some more Ocker-style slang to Australianise it. Not my area though. --Sog1970 09:23, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Upsilon Sigma Sigma

Hey bud, I'm in Europe right now studying for the next month, do you mind taking over duties with USS for the next month or so? I need you to archive all of last month's stuff too. You're a smart dude, I have confidence you can follow the format without any trouble. Leave me a message if you need anything, I'll be checking in on uncyc from time to time. -- Sir SF13 (Talk) GUN WotM RotM FBotM VFH SK Maj. ΥΣΣ 09:24 Budapest, Hun 2 Jun, 2010

Re. Afterlife

What? It's still at the bottom on my screen. Could you post a screen cap of what you see? Btw, my resolution is 1280x1024, if that matters.Sir Padddy5 CUN VFH 18:34, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Chronarion

Why not just go here and to look at his earliest contributions, and keep going forward if you so wish? http://en.uncyclopedia.co/w/index.php?title=Special:Contributions&dir=prev&limit=500&showall=0&target=Chronarion Sir Padddy5 CUN VFH 18:34, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Puritan Poetical Thanks

'FROM THE DESK OF GUILDENSTERNENSTEIN'

Thank you supporting my recently featured article.

Your support is greatly appreciated.

—Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 00:35, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

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Post Apocalypse

Dude! It's ready for your magic. That Pee made a wee little difference, we could say. I hope Guildy, etc., will like this now. Whattya think?--Funnybony    20:24, Jun 7

And I will look soon, it was very good yesterday. My magick has a place when needed, but maybe you've done well. I'll give it a look see before later comes later. I'm on a semi-roll on UnPoetia:Well-Oiled Birds, and will focus on that for awhile today. When it's shaped a little more I want to link every line to a UnNews story on the oil thing, do you have favorites? More soon, Al soon later

Dude! Great! When I saw your edits it reminded me of my own advice in HTBAFANJACF, "spend at least as much time 'deleting' drab facts as you do 'inserting' them." I think it's awesome now. I hope the Pee reviewer will see their advice didn't go in vain. Do you think it's ready for a go on VFH? Please don't Nom anything until New Moon on the 12th (for good luck). Cheers!--Funnybony    11:42, Jun 8

Glad you liked it, I didn't know if you would. I took off the thing on my user page per your advice, all wait for New Moon. Do I see it rising? Al 12:02 8 6 MMX

HERE is what the Pee reviewer thinks about the result of his Pee, and our joint effort for perfection:

Wow, you've really improved this, well done. The narration is awesome. I'll give it a more thorough read through when I have more time and let you know if I have any more suggestions, but again, great work. --Black Flamingo 19:46, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

We don't believe in any post apocalypse, at least not in our life time. I consulted with top astronomers and astrological experts in India, and they say the planets will NOT be in any such unusual positions as to portend any apocalypse in our life time, and Dec 21, 2012 is just another day. BUT, we do love to cross the finish line, which is an FA. An FA is not winning a race, but it is crossing the finish line. Writer of the Year is winning a race, and I'm not in the running. But you are. Anyway, maybe we should include the Pee reviewers above quote if we Nom Post Apocalypse for VFH. I also really improved the final picture. Cheers, dude!--Funnybony    20:28, Jun 8

Piffle and sticks. On, hey, you changed it, you had Dec. 12, 1012, which is what I was going to comment on. I'll look at the pic. And what's this "we" kemoshobee, your page grew from your brain and I just gave it a haircut. Al few minutes later

p.s. Laughing at the last picture change. Still laughing half a minute after seeing it.

Dude! Take a closer look at that last picture. The cosmonaut on the right has a Russian space logo, the guy on left has NASA space logo. Hehehe!--Funnybony    11:30, Jun 9

Hi, I came by for a few minutes of innernests. I know, that's one of the things I was laughing at, maybe the US guy (Gus Grissom by the looks of him) finally got his wish. Al 11:46

Hey, thanks for that important info. I just changed the name to Capt. Gus Grissom, Jr. Cheers!--Funnybony    16:55, Jun 9 16:55, June 9, 2010

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HowTo:Appreciate Womp Rats

Bro! This had a PEE over a year ago, and I fixed it up. Then when I discovered your "hero" angle it all made sense, and I changed to a HowTo. Would you like to finish this off? One good thing is I write shorter articles, so less work! Does it need another Pee? Or is it ready for a go at the finish line? Jes wonderin' Hey, let me know when Tantra is ready. But I think, perhaps, it should end in the middle. And then make another article out of the 2nd half called HowTo:Tantra, that gives those instructions. Just a re-thought. Wow! Tonight I got my son to watch 12 Angry Men (old b/w classic). And the acting blew his mind. The whole movie is in one room with 0 special effects. And it's riveting! Remember that? Freakin' awesome! Cheers!--Funnybony    18:56, Jun 13

Thanks, will look at Womp Rats soon (in fact their distant cousins, the brown rats, are crawling all over me as I type). Tantra works as one article, imnho, and I've been cutting it back several times today and am getting it in good and less cumbersome shape. Has to have the right balance of data and humour, and your comments plus the pee review really helped. Black and white, naw, can't recall the medium. Although I think the old lady who "said" or "pretended" she had trouble seeing was in on it, and they both pulled the wool over Henry Fonda's eyes. And the movie had the elevated train and the fan in the jury room, both special effects which predated and inspired Lucas' and Speilberg's later efforts. Al sometime during that same day.

Check out these two ditties: Punji Stick and Joe Pesci. You're rubbing off on me. Cheers!--Funnybony    17:33, Jun 14

Whattya think 'bout this?

I think this is really good now. But I can't nom it without a Pee Review. Do you think THIS is ready for a shot at VFH? It's featured right now on HowTo, as you know, which could be a plus. Can't beat the price of admission. BTW: Tomorrow I send in a really heavy UnNews on Iran war. Mega serious shit to be kidding about! Lets hope being on UnNews will make it UnHappen! Man, Dude! You're completely in the grip of a 17 year winning streak. Cheers! FoneBone funnybony! July 1, 2010

Good job on Womp Rats - they seem to elicit your awe as they do to me

After all, womp rats have a page on Wikipedia. Hehe! Oh, I'm adding this here because that neat turtle pic covers your edit button on my browser. In case you didn't hear from anyone else.

BTW: I added that reference as you advised on both band pages. Cheers!--Funnybony    19:18, Jun 27

Duran Duran?

How about this cat Roberto Duran? Only a guy my age would know him, and appreciate the absurd truth in the humor. Any potential here? Hey, HowTo:Be Uncyclopedia Beach Local just got featured on HowTo by the powers that be. Neat! I think Womp Rat is much better. But the point of the featured HowTo is to get people to fucking REGISTER. How's things? I think Guildy's take on your bird poem is really good. Cheers!--Funnybony    21:08, Jun 19

UnPoetia:Well-Oiled Birds

Fun! But I thought - because its OIL, it would look better in black text. Nice blue is being too nice. Just a thought!--Funnybony    20:38, Jun 8

Nah, but maybe a black background washing in from the bottom right or something, worth a thought. Hmmmmmmm. The text has to be blue, I guess, so people would know to click on, or at least look at, the links. I love the turtle gif, found it on random changes by "chance" (and we all know how much credit "chance" gets in this universe). I went to the zoo today and we saw a zookeeping lady "steal" an egg from a Flamingo nest, under threat of attack from a few flamingoes. Day in the life. Al few minutes later

Problem

There seems to be a problem with my admin powers you discussed on my talk page. For instance, I cannot ban. Perhaps you can give me administrative powers into the server so I can investigate a possible software problem? Recall that my expertise and amazingness in the field of physics gives me a working knowledge of the entire universe and everything that it contains. Thanks sir. --Lineintegral123 01:07, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

The discussion involves this note left on Linintegrall's talk page:

You have won easily, and have been appointed an administrator. Please report to Why do I need to provide this? for your duties and things like rollback, banning privliges, ways to circumvent feature voting in order to just pick a feature, etc. Good luck on the site. Aleister the Administrator 21:28 6 6 MMX

Give me a guide here, who is it you'd like to ban? And I also have a question pertaining to the universe and all it contains--I've often thought that time and gravity are identical, which is why a gravity particle cannot be found. Can this theory be eligable for prizes and things immediately, or will it have to have further support amongst the physics communities? Thanks, Aleister 1:12 9 6

I don't have anyone in mind to ban now; I just went to the recent changes page to see if the link was there. Time is part of the fabric of space and not at all the same a gravity, which is a force. Gravitons are independent of the fabric of space. Think of time as another dimension along which objects in the universe can move. Gravity does not share this behavior. Your theory is an epic failure and I will win the Nobel Prize instead for eventually proving a significant grand unification theory. --Lineintegral123 01:15, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, but gravitons are unfound, unproven, and a failed theory. Time/space implies the existence of a unified force on all things--so time itself connects all objects in space, thus implying a force upon all things. Hence, gravity. Please mail my Nobel Prize forthwith, as I have just beaten you to the gut. (Pats self on back) Aleister 1:21 9 6 MMX

Do you know what an integral is? Thought not. Therefore, you loose and have no understanding of Gravity. Gravitons are not a failed theory, they are simply unproven, just as evolution is. Your logic requires serious work. I'd be willing to tutor you in it after I have tutored you in basic integral and differential calculus. Let me know when you've brushed up on your algebra. Cordially, --Lineintegral123 01:27, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I am loose. And yes, gravitons are a failed theory if my theory is true, which it is:Time and gravity are the same thing! Think it over for more than a few seconds of low wattage, mull it in your mind for a day or so. Go to sleep working out the connections. Then you will see that not only am I correct, but that it explains why no one can find gravitons, just like they cannot find fairies, or the Loch Ness monster, because they are not real but ignorant professionals have given "them" a name. Time is gravity, andthe other way around. I not only do not loose, I wynn. Aleister 1:31 9 6 MMX

You can believe what you want. But you have clearly lost. When I'm an admin, I will ban your computer not only from here, but from the internet. Such is the power of a beautiful mind genius such as myself. Euler's number would have been apparent to me without the proof. --Lineintegral123 01:37, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, Euler, she is hot. Why don't you give me her number, and then her and I can test my time/gravity theory in more ways than 1. Aleister few minutes later

Oh Al, you and your ridiculous pseudoscience. On the other hand, gravity and evolution - that's the same thing too, since they are both "unproven". However you can never really "prove" any scientific theory, so by that logic, time, light, electricity, gravity and evolution are all the same thing. No one has discovered "timetons", for instance. All your Nobel Prize are belong to me. ~ 04:08, Jun 9, 2010

Your logic is illogical, of course. To be serious, when I was high once I actually went into this very very logical and well thought out and written theory of how time and gravity are the same thing, and it made perfect sense to me at the time and to others later. That's where that came from. But you're right too, so we will share the Nobel and leave Lineintegral on the outside looking woefully in at the celebration. Aleister, signing off 4:16 9 6 mmx

Lineintegral is already outside looking woefully at our celebration for attaining adminhood. ~ 04:27, Jun 9, 2010

He is envious that I found GUT before him. You see, when time and space divided into two when their real state of oneness slowed down, gravity became the way that time acts upon space. Space acting upon time creates the other forces, all related to electricity, which itself is a space/time read-out of gravity, which is the time/space read out of electricity. In the near future the name Newton, Einstein, and Chains will be said in the same breath. Say it now, just to hear how it will sound to the populace. Has a ring to it, eh! I will sign a photograph for Lineintegall so he can hang it on his mom's basement wall where he can point at it and tell people that he knew Chains before the theory became world famous. And they will say "You know CHAINS?? Are you fucking me??". And he will glow with pride. Chains 23:15 9 6 MMX

This is the best conversation I have ever seen on a talk page. --Black Flamingo 19:05, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you. Brought to you by "Rice Dream", the ice cream substitute with pazaaz! (only $3.99 at good stores and supermarkets everywhere, 50 cents or 30 pence off with a print out of this coupon)--checkout gals fall in love with you when you hand it to them.) Al later that same day.

It reminds me of this time my friend took ecstasy and drew me a picture, which he claimed was the meaning of life. To me it just looked like a bunch of squiggles, but to him it made perfect sense. When he woke up the next day though, he no longer understood it. --Black Flamingo 16:25, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Robert Anton Wilson, or Terence McKenna, or another of the greats, says somewhere, to paraphrase, that the reason some people don't come back from their trips adequately explaining their theories is that they have to have the skill and language capacity to write them down in comprehendable form while they occur. Wilson would type his manuscripts "sober", then edit high on good grass, then another edit off of grass, then another on, and the final polish off of grass. Those scribble may have actually held the meaning of life, if only he could have explained them (my main teacher, by the way, told me the meaning of life is to

"learn how we create". Which is the best explanation I've heard when the word "creation" is taken many ways on many "levels". Maybe that's what the squiggles were telling him. But I don't htink ecstasy (which I'm a'gin em) is a good "drug" for mental exploration in the first place, so the squiggles make sense there. Give me grass/hashish/hash oil or sacred mushrooms and I'm a happy camper. Al few hours later

I seem to remember reading some Buddhist text that said the meaning of life was to accept death. I think I pretty much agree with that. On a lighter note, I might take my friend's drawing to Lineintegral, see what he makes of it. --Black Flamingo 19:20, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

HOW DARE YOU

You insult me with your idiocy. Change the UCLA article back to second best. Better yet, edit it correctly and change it to best. Now. Or I will steal your rug. --Lineintegral123 01:49, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, so you admit it is the second best. Very well. Of course Berk is the best. If you steal my rug I will challange you to a bowl-off, and I will win. Aleister moments later

Al - I want to have your babies. Maybe with barbeque sauce. Nominally Humane! some time Wednesday, 02:32, Jun 9 2010 UTC

I beat you to my babies. Seasoned correctly, they were delicious. After meeting me, the authorities were convinced that the baby mama ran off with them, because who could blame her. I told them "Just don't come snoppin' around my yard with one of those portable ground-x-ray machines if you know what's good for you" and they laughed, thinking it was just about the funniest joke they've ever heard. Playing gotcha with the boys in blue, a true joy. Aleister 4:02 9 6 MMX

I prefer my babies with sweet and sour sauce. ~ 04:12, Jun 9, 2010

One will be "delivered" forthwith. With fries on the side. Al 12:05 9 6 MMX

Sir?!? Excuse me sir???

Are you enjoying the flight? Can I get you anything? Fluff your pillow? Cook your taco? Adjust your seating, airflow, overhead light or oxygen? Ok then, I salute you!  ~ Avast Matey!!! Happytimes are here!*  (talk) (stalk) Π   ~  ~  12 Jun 2010 ~ 05:08 (UTC)

Tantra

Was able to check out your latest revision and I have to say I'm impressed. It's looks very solid my friend. I think it deserves to be nommed for VFH so that's what I did.

Peace, Love, and Xbox --—John Lydon 12:08, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

You did WHAT? Jesus, Joseph and the baby mama Mary. Thanks, but you've opened up a can of wormy things, and they will crawl out into the sun to be eaten by cute Robins. Aleister 12:11 15 6 MMX

YEA!!!

Help...

How, exactly, does one say that they shall be attempting to review something? On a thingy. I mean. Though why am I asking when I could probably just look at the source code and what other people did and figure it out myself?

Hmm... perhaps because I probably won't. >.< ~ Lyrithya *shifty eyes* (words) (actions) -- 20100615 - 15:46 (UTC)

OK, you seem to have that straightened out. But if not, then just write on the pee review request that you will review it, and give a rough timeframe, like "I will take this, so keep your mitts off of it. It will be done within 10 minutes or 10 hours, and if not done then, maybe within 24 hours. But if the sun comes and goes without it being done, just assume I am dead, and that the neighbors have come to divide up my poccessions , and if luck would have it, one of them may complete the review." Then sign your name, be on your way, and forget about it until Chief reminds you, and then delete his message. Easy as that! Al a little while later

Oh... that... okay, thanks. And delete his message? Is that safe?

And could you tell me if I'm doing any better with reviews? Although you were the nice one before, weren't you... hmm. ~ Lyrithya *shifty eyes* (words) (actions) -- 20100615 - 20:01 (UTC)

Well-Oiled Birds

I reviewed your article--hopefully it's helpful. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 16:56, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

My Draft

Here's my very-much-revised version of the poem (thus far, anyway)--let me know what you think. We can incorporate stuff from both this and the revised version you're working on into the finished project. Ultimately, though, this is far more your piece than mine, so I'll defer to you on any and all creative differences unless I feel particularly strongly. Anyway, what I have so far:

I’m told that the seabirds don’t mind it at all
That their homes are destroyed,
Their swim slowed to a crawl
As they try and they try to swim through the sludge
That covers their wings
Like a toxic hot fudge.

A crane in my view struts on a shore once so perfect,
Her wings now black glue,
Slim legs stick to long neck
I saw a brown pelican laughing it off,
Pouch sticky with food—
Did I hear him cough?

Oil-soaked Egrets take to the sand—
In throes of surprise
They stick where they land.
Seagulls once flew in the skies high above,
They dove into the sea
And it fit like a glove.

Osprey, sandpipers, ducks, a few storks—
They bob in the oil
Looking somewhat like corks;
They feel the black gold as it rolls off their backs
Down their shocked open mouths
Into tiny air sacs.

For birds never know they’ve been slated to die
So people can profit
Invest, spend and buy.
For while corporate execs just flip us the bird,
Real birds cannot fly
And their cries go unheard.

Though birds suffer and die, the Pigs do okay:
They don't care for the Gulf—
They live far away
In their big corporate houses powered by crude
That currently stains
Birds’ feathers so rude.

White men in black suits look on with a frown:
Not because of destruction—
Their profits are down.
They’ll lie and they’ll spin, no matter the cost
To try and recoup
The dollars they’ve lost.

Stockbrokers fight arm-in-arm buying and selling
Trading presents and futures
(It’s your future they’re selling)
To try and ensure their place in the sun
While we bite the bullet
From their oil spill gun.

The press and the President make like they care
(Barack’s numbers are down,
And the mid-term draws near)
But their words and their rhetoric won’t plug the spill
That sends tons of black death
Into the Gulf still.

Incorporate what you like, leave what you don't, and let me know where you stand on this tomorrow. I'm done working on this for the time being, and will be tearing shit up in Modern Warfare 2 for the rest of the night. Peace. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 03:23, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Also...

...because my review was so damn helpful and all, <notwhoring>I don't suppose you could bring yourself to take a look at this. Eh? Eh?</notwhoring> —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 04:40, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Second Revision

I like a lot of what you've done in merging our two respective versions. However, one thing I don't really like is all the stuff not relating to either birds or "pigs," if you know what I mean. I think fundamentally the poem should be one contrasting the plight of the birds and the corporate people responsible for that (and all that stuff about action you wish to put in the end)--this contrast is even implicit in the title "Well-Oiled Birds," with 'Well-Oiled' having obvious mechanical and corporate connotations and 'Birds' meaning, well, birds. On that note, I think all that stuff about fish and mermaids and Bennie the Gimp and Meg Ryan's complexion really detract from the fundamental contrast that's the core of the piece. On that note, here's my second revision:

I’m told that the seabirds don’t mind it at all
That their homes are destroyed,
Their swim slowed to a crawl
As they try and they try to swim through the sludge
That covers their wings
Like a toxic hot-fudge.

A crane in my view struts on a shore once so perfect,
Her wings now black glue,
Slim legs stick to long neck.
I saw a brown pelican laughing it off,
Pouch sticky with food—
Did I hear him cough?

Oil-soaked Egrets take to the sand—
In throes of surprise
They stick where they land.
Seagulls once flew in the skies high above, I like the present tense, brings the viewer intol the scene if its dive, fly, fits, etc.
They dove into the sea
And it fit like a glove!

Osprey, sandpipers, ducks, a few storks—
They bob in the oil
Looking somewhat like corks;
They feel the black gold as it rolls off their backs
Down their shocked open mouths
Into tiny air sacs.

For birds never know they’ve been slated to die
So people can profit
Invest, spend and buy.
For while corporate execs just flip us the bird, the image here is of the execs both giving the finger as well as flipping an actual bird corpse, which explains the language in the next two lines
Real birds cannot fly
And their cries go unheard.

Though birds suffer and die, the Pigs do okay: I'm uncomfortabler with pigs, for several reasons, inc. dated language and that pigs are very intelligent and loving animals
They don't care for the Gulf—
They live far away
In their big corporate houses powered by crude
That fatally stains
Birds’ feathers—how rude!

White men in black suits look on with a frown:
Not because of destruction—
Their profits are down!
They’ll lie and they’ll spin, no matter the cost
To try and recapture
All the dollars they’ve lost. Dollars are particular to some countries and not other. "Income" pertains to both money and their lost incoming oil.

Stockbrokers fight arm-in-arm, buying and yelling
Trading presents and futures
(It’s your future they’re selling)
To try and ensure their place in the sun
While we bite the bullet
From their oil spill gun.

The Congress and President make like they care
(Barack’s numbers are down, paranthesis used in last stanza, two in a row maybe a bit too much
And the mid-term draws near),
But partisan rhetoric won’t plug the spill
That sends Texas-tea death
Into the Gulf still.


I've both tweaked some of my lines to match your revisions where I thought the meter worked better, and tweaked some of your lines to better match mine along similar lines. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 15:54, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Eh, I suppose. Once again, it's more your piece than mine, so do as you will. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 18:27, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Feel free to change "pigs" and the like. I would prefer, however, if you retain my changes that improve the meter, particularly the lines "The Congress and President make like they care" and "That sends Texas-tea death." Your version of the former line is, like, fifteen or sixteen syllables long, which totally spoils the meter IMO, and the word "black" in your version of the latter sounds just a bit awkward because it breaks up the two consecutively stress syllables of "tea" and "death." Most everything else I'm not all that attached to, however, so keep what you want. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 18:37, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Good meter fix, I got carried away there. Your earlier changes which "fixed" the first and last stanza of the earlier draft were exceptionaly good. Maybe black death can go somewhere else, I'll be careful with stress and counts. Will get to this a little later, I'm actually watching the hearings with Hayward, BP's chairman, who has been failing and protecting his behind all day (the best of no good options for him). Thanks, and later, Al a few minutes later

Just got your message--those are all perfectly fair and acceptable compromises as far as I'm concerned. The sea creatures fit much more than Meg Ryan, certainly, and I'm unaware of this whole "Bennie the Gimp" situation, but if it's topical and funny that by all means keep it. I'm pretty flexible when it comes to most of this stuff--I would just prefer more than anything that the meter work, hence my above note. And I was watching those same hearings earlier today for a while. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 18:49, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

The hearings are back on again. I was surprised only one sane person, I mean protester, spoke up at the start of the hearing. Then later. Poor Meg, I bet she wishes she had feathers so she can be included. Bennie isn't topical, a made up mafia name (with the link), just that it's an iconic image for the mob to cement-shoe victims into the deep waters, and here (lol now) Bennie gets the oil in his mouth on the way down. The last two stanzas, I'll put them on your talk page and see if we can work them out when I finish, I hope they work well. And thanks for the vote on wheel, for some reason I really love that page and it's trials on VFH has made me continue to edit it towards a better article, and it's almost there. Appreciated. More later, and this collab is great fun! (except for when it's not. I did the main work on the May frat collab, so will keep myself out of the Taco page for the most part. I hope you can join in on that one, or next months which should be really fun) Al 20:00 17 6 MMX

Thanks for your kite vote

THANK YOU for voting on Hello there! I'm a kite, and I will ruin your day! You are the BEST! I will kill you. What? I didn't say anything.User:Mrthejazz/sig 02:16, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

This

I didn't know you were deleted in 2007! I didn't know you even existed in 2007. —Pelozurian (talk) 22:42, 18 June 2010 (UTC)

Yes, and I have come back from the archives to extract my vengence. When that is complete Uncyclopedia will know the extent of my wrath!!!! (sinister laugh) Ya ha ha, Ya ha ha 'Al few minutes later

I knew it...!! The multiple features written by you were all part of a grand conspiracy to take over the world! How could I be so blind? —Pelozurian (talk) 22:52, 18 June 2010 (UTC)

I will not be satisfied with just the world, but will attain the universe quivering under my thumb in order to correct the wrong done my kind in 2007. Join me, and we can make it happen twice as quick. But remember, the dark side rewards with strange gifts. Ya ha ha, Ya ha ha Aleist now, moments have passed

Lemme guess, you're my father too? —Pelozurian (talk) 23:08, 18 June 2010 (UTC)

I don't know about that, but I knocked on your mom's door quite a bit a few years ago. On the Darth Vader thing, did you see the great vid on Doc's talk page? That one had me laughing like a hyena. Now don't you have a paper route and/or a Death Star to get to before dinner? 'leist'r today, at least

Oh snap! I totally forgot about my mission to blow up the Death Star! Thanks mister!! —Pelozurian (talk) 23:17, 18 June 2010 (UTC)

You guys better train hard with brave Womp Rat if you want to succeed in blowing up the death star. Without Womp Rat training you stand no chance. Cheers!--Funnybony    08:52, Jun 19

The Ending

I looked it over and responded on my talkpage. So, um, go there and see what I wrote I guess. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 14:24, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

A suggestion

Perhaps, per my suggestions on my talk page that I left in response, something along the lines of this:

Students, housewives, old broken-down hippies
(Who haven't been laid
Since the mid-nineteen-sixties)
Ask for world healing, bring all of creation
To a nonviolent stand:
The United Nations.

"End Earth's destruction!" our request to the leaders,
"Restore lands and waters!"
With the help of the feeders.
So here, a rhymed call for humanity's quorum,
Now gather your friends
At the world's modern Forum!

—Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 00:50, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

I feel so alone, gonna end up a big old pile of them bones

Just read chicken again, I think we've done a really good job. I was just wondering, more out of curiosity than anything, how do we determine who gets credit for it? Obviously me, you and Paizuri do, but what about Skinfan? And I also noticed edits from HELPME and Cheddar. --Black Flamingo 18:11, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I didn't add to that little masterpiece. But I can suggest, like I was in a band, there were 5 players and manager, we just divided everything by 6. Maybe I wrote the song, but we still divided by 6, cause it couldn't happen with out every player. Hehe! Do the math. Cheers!--Funnybony    18:21, Jun 21

It's a shame there isn't money involved. We all get half a point if it gets featured, I was just trying to figure out which users would get those half points. But still... you were in a band! That's cool. I used to be in a band. --Black Flamingo 18:30, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Just got back on the net after a couple of days off. When we nom Chicken, and maybe another edit sweep should shape it up really good, I think everyone should get credit. Six sounds good, unless someone opts out. Personally I only want points or 1/2 points on pages I feel that I made quality contributions too, I won't list any where I just did a bit. I haven't looked at the edits on this page, but the 6 you mention make sense in terms of building the structure and the writing of the page. It was a fun collab. I did so much of it that I feel like keeping out of everyone's way with Taco. Did you want to nom Chicken in a day or a few? Lots of noms going up, some good ones, others that ain't, but I think Chicken is one of the good ones. Points all around! Al 00:51 22 6 MMX

I'd rather wait until we've had a pee. But yeah, those six are fine by me, even if they were minor edits. --Black Flamingo 15:59, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

I agree about the pee, but nobody has taken it as yet. We should wait then, and see if someone grabs it, because we could use other viewpoints. Are you going to do edits on Taco? Maybe I'll see the direction it's taking and join in just a bit if HappyTimes and Paizuri don't mind. Would you like to do a collab on Marilyn Monroe? The data on the page is good now, but it could use additional sections to expand the overall history and story of an amazing life. Al 17:23 22 6 MMX

We could ask Hernia to get it. And yeah I'd love to collab on Monroe, I wanted to write that article myself at one point. As for Taco, I'm waiting until I have an idea... ...Nothing yet.--Black Flamingo 18:00, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Nah, she hates me. I tried to rape her after I gave her laughing gas and a roofie, and for some reason she hasn't talked to me since. But if you tell her I had nothing to do with the article, maybe I can get around the restraining order. Great, on Monroe, that would be fun. I like most of what's there now, even the list of movies which work with the added comments. Let's talk on that. Cool. Yeah, same here, I don't have any idea for Taco so am waiting to see the page's direction and join in. How does Chicken look on your page? Skinfan changed the large lettering format to fit his screen and it's now scrunched up on mine, so checking on how different screens see it. Aleister 18:06 22 6 MMX

Chicken looks good on mine, but I have a really weird resolution which is totally unlike anyone else's (which is why Matfen usually arranges my images for me). I love what you've got so far with Monroe. We need more info on her films and personal problems though. I will do a bit of reading up on her and see what I can add. Have you seen any of her films by the way? I love Some Like it Hot and The Misfits. --Black Flamingo 18:12, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks. I worked with what was there when someone put it on VFD, and carved into it and added quite a bit then and later. I've seen many of her films, and her seduction of the male creature runs through all of them. I think it was Robert Anton Wilson (who loved her by the way, and he and other agnostic mystics see her as the Goddess of the century) who said her secret was always seeming and talking like she was just about to have an orgasm, as if every man watching her could tip her over the edge at any moment they chose. She does dominate the screen and all the sexual energy in the "room" in all her roles and probably in every scene she filmed, quite a trick. And she, Norma Jean, was able to "put on" Marilyn at will--Marilyn was her character, one she played throughout her career, and Norma could beome "not her" as easioy as becoming her. I like that whoever wrote the page put in lots of factual information about her death and the questions surrounding it, we just have to funny it up more but also leave the data intact. Lots of ideas now that you've got me thinking about the page. Marilyn, we hardly knew ya. Al timeless, or about 23:00 that same day

Lol. Just wanna assure you that I don't hate you. We just have nothing to talk about. I mean, what do you talk about on Uncyc besides collabs and reviews? Unless you're HELPME, then you also talk about gay stuff. Seriously, all those times I said I hated you are all jokes. Oh, and I'm back to being depressed and not writing again. Fuck you dental school making my vacation 2 weeks shorter than everybody else's. ~ 12:43, Jun 23, 2010

Of course you hate me, why should you be different? And apparantly the admins at your school hate you, why would you have two weeks less vacation than everyone else? And pick a subject to talk about, any subject, and we will dazzle each other with our brillance. People will come from all over Uncyland to marvel at our conversation. Except for HELPME, who is too gay to appreciate a good conversation about anything other than dicks. Al few minutes later

8======D ~ 13:14, Jun 23, 2010

You caught me perfectly, actual size (about a quarter of an inch, fine for a woman but damn embarassing for a guy). Must actually go now, you've turned me on so much I must. . .whoops, too late. See? Pathetic size pathetic duration. Epic fail. Al a few moments later, and really must go

I'm back for a few moments and...damn, it happened again. Al 16:11 23 6 MMX

LOL

I just came to say that this edit summary made me laugh. :)--Sir HELPME Talk (more? --> CUN ROTM NOTM Pleb USS Pees SK ) On Tuesday, 05:01, June 22 2010 UTC

Thanks. I hope the IP read it too when he came back to vandalize again! Al 17:25 22 6 MMX

This

John Lydon has been watching you and noticed you voted for Stalker to be Featured. Now he doesn't have to kill you.

--—John Lydon 12:23, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

UnNews:"Runaway General" McChrystal found and returned home‎

As much as I normally think that song parodies are the most brainless form of humor, I would appreciate it if a parody of the refrain of Dr. Hook's Cover of the Rolling Stone, perhaps in a {{Cquote}}, suddenly appeared in this UnNews. Spıke ¬ 21:07 22-Jun-10

That would be nice. I often wish the same thing. I will go ask my genie, who I keep in a salt shaker shaped like a glass slipper (that's how I caught her in the first place). Al an hour or so later

Good thinking, it's got built in air holes.  ~ Avast Matey!!! Happytimes are here!*  (talk) (stalk) Π   ~  ~  24 Jun 2010 ~ 00:20 (UTC)

I wanna be loved by you (just you)

I have added a few bits to Marilyn. Not much, but have a lot more to add when I get time. Might need to go and watch a few of her films if I can to get more ideas (All About Eve and Gentlemen Prefer Blondes for example, I don't really know anything about them). I also wanna make these changes if you agree:

• The opening quotes are funny but would work better in the main body of the text, I reckon. If we could think of a good set up for them.
• A lot of the Moe Howard references are too random, particularly the one at the end where it's claimed the CIA killed her for exposing him. I'm not saying remove them entirely, but maybe we could keep these parts to a minimum.
• I think it would be funnier if the narrator actually wanted to shove the pills up her ass, saying something like "if you want me to try to shove them up Monroe's dead ass then I'm game!"

Let me know what you think. --Black Flamingo 16:55, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sounds good, I'll take a look at the page. All About Eve isn't her film, she only appears in one short scene where she gets some attention for actually speaking and moving while at a party. Which is what she does best (except in private). I think there were only two Moe Howard references, and they seemed funny but probably are random. I put them in as a counter-balance to the generally accepted view that the Kennedy family had her killed by the mafia or the CIA, and it's funny that Moe Howard actually did it to cover-up his affair with her. Maybe if we had a chop of her and Moe it would be funnier, to set the visual contrast in. Come to think of it that would be a classic chop (something I am totally unable to do, talent or equipment-wise). I'll take a read and see you on the "flip side". Loved by you 19:27 23 6 MMX

p.s. Ah, I see where you're going, to do each film. I'll take Bus Stop for sure, and play with some others. The opening quotes are very good, imnho, and I found them there and left them , which is rare for me (I don't like opening quotes). They play off each other almost perfectly, and sum up an aspect of her life, and having the second said by DiMaggio creates a sadness/pathos right off the bat. Can we keep them, pretty please with a c-note on top. This could be a really good page, and I'll do my best to honor and throw a pie in the face of Norma Jeanne. Al 19:49 23 6 MMX

Ok kids, you can keep them, but they're your responsibility. I think what I'll do is just add everything I can think of, and then leave it to you go make the final edits and maybe get it pee'd, etc. I'm gonna be leaving the site for a short while soon so that's probably the best way. --Black Flamingo 15:47, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Also, that Rushmore pic, could the one on the far right be Rita Hayworth? I might be wrong. --Black Flamingo 17:35, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

RE: Toast

Thanks. It's kind of a communal sockpuppet I created to curb VFH prejudice. So basically, you can write whatever you want under the account, and not take credit for it or disclose that you wrote it until you want to. We also tried to make the sockpuppet an asshole so people would just leave it alone, but it seems to have garnered more attention than we wanted it to. The password to the account is "oranges" (don't log in for another 24 hours until the ban expires) and the list of people currently using it as a sock are on the page. You can add yourself on there if you like. Just don't abuse it. --EMC ^[TALK] 02:55 Jun 24 2010

St. Clairsville, Ohio

Kill the quotes? They are both generic slut jokes. Spıke ¬ 13:42 25-Jun-10

Mind Helping me out?

Since you help me by spicing things up on my HowTo:Date an Emo Girl, do you mind looking at my article Claire Redfield and see what can be spiced up? I ask you because your so awesome at it.--DirectorWILLYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 02:33, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Lol

I randomly reverted your userpage. I'm awesome.--Sir HELPME Talk (more? --> CUN ROTM NOTM Pleb USS Pees SK ) On Sunday, 06:29, June 27 2010 UTC

Revenge will be sweet, and, of course, served cold. Al, Sunday, 11:06

Well-Oiled Thank Yous

So it looks like our collaboration's going to make it to the front page despite the naysayers (I wish the same could be said about this). So, how do you want to handle the thank-you templates? We could do one together, or just do separate ones, or just one of us could do one, or we could do nothing because no one cares about thank you templates anyway. What do you think? —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 13:42, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like it may make it. I'd like to contact some of the activist groups just before or on the day it's featured, so they can look at it. Are you good at templates? I've never made one, and have copied some code but never worked one up. If you'd like to go ahead and make one up, please do so, and we can also thank people as we wander their pages. Oily. Al 21:07 27 6 MMX

Well, I'm notoriously lazy when it comes to templates, as I've used a variant of the same exact one my entire Uncyclopedia career. I could send out thank-yous of some sort on behalf us both, though, I guess. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 21:46, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe we can both thank people, that would actually be fun. Once voting is done you take the odd numbers and I'll take even, or some combination, and we can just write thanks as well as talk to the others list if we feel like it. And we should thank the nay voters too, for pushing the process into beneficial (?) changes. And I'll thank Candice Night personally, glad to do it. Al few minutes later

Sounds good to me. I'll take the odd, you take the even. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 17:00, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Also, are you a football fan in any capacity? If so, go here. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 17:01, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Even it is. Congrats on our very fine page. I saw your fantasy league forum, I'm a fan but not a fantasy league player, it sounds like a lot of work. And I usually just follow player stats, my main interest now is Brett Favre and seeing his records expand every time he touches the ball. He'd better come back. Remember my Favre unNews? I hope he survived it. Al 21:37 29 6

It is kind of a lot of work, but it's so much funny. And yes, I remember your Favre UnNews--it was brilliant. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 02:29, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

I'm blushing, and now have taken off my clothes and laid down on the bed. Nah, the only fantasy league I'm in is fantasizing about the Miley Cyrus backup dancers. Hey, a factoid: our poem is only the fourth poem featured on Uncy. And maybe the only article (I don't know this for a fact) entirely linked. Both of those things are fun. Al 15 minutes later

I didn't know either of those things. Interesting. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 15:28, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Congrats!

Well done!

Hey, Al, you got the best PEE Review I ever saw (not that I've seen that many). Cheers!--Funnybony    16:50, Jun 30

Wow, how nice. Can I use that to thank half the people with? (Guildy and I divided the list?) You just reminded me that I must answer the yoga stuff, will do that soon. Thanks again, see you "there". Al mere second later

Yes, please use it. But don't abuse it. The picture is quite delicate and easily gets its feelings hurt. For a Thanks it will be honored. The picture loves us. Cheers--Funnybony    20:18, Jun 30

Hello Alerister

Unfortunately you don't exist.--M'su Carencro - Talk - Contributions - Blag 02:46, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Ferns

Have any? Indoor ones, I mean. They don't need to be potted, though... they can just sit on the floor. Some do that, you know. ~ Lyrithya *shifty eyes* (words) (actions) -- 20100629 - 05:29 (UTC)

ugh and there i was having been all started up at the mention of the word "potted" --nachlader 05:32, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

What, like potted meat? ~ Lyrithya *shifty eyes* (words) (actions) -- 20100629 - 20:19 (UTC)

Naw, I don't grow indoors. Would like to, but the only time I tried the plants didn't come out well. You have to have an entire system set up, lots of light, etc. Probably only fun if you have like 10 or more plants kickin' out bud, and that takes lots of work and know-how to do it exactly right. Al, smoke 'em if you've got 'em 21:40 29 6

Chicken Dance

I'm not much of a dancer but I'll try to get to that within the next day or two. Been pretty busy lately so I'm not able to review quite as many articles as I would like, but I will hit this one before Thursday. Scouts honor. --—John Lydon 14:35, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

More Monroe

I'm really falling in love with that page. There's no doubt it'll be another feature for both of us (or at least, half-feature. Or maybe 0.25 for me and the rest for you). It's hilarious, and so well written. --Black Flamingo 18:12, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

How can you help but fall in love with her. If she's featured, and who can help but feature Marilyn, we'd both do a half (you've done great work, but who can help but do great work with MM) and then find out the earlier creator and they'd get a half, even though it was a VFD rescue. I'll look at your edits later, and maybe put some more time in (but who wouldn't put some more time in, it's. . .) Later, Al 21:34 29 6

"Jealous of Moe Howard", Why I oughtta... Good edits there. And yeah I have seen The Misfits, haven't been able to think of anything to write about it yet. I will try to add a bit more before Friday though (when I'm leaving the site for an unspecified amount of time). --Black Flamingo 16:00, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Right, added some about The Misfits. Hope it's ok. I have one last cut to propose: The bit about Miller cheating on Monroe, along with the picture. I just never found it that funny. Also she was, like, totally cheating on him. --Black Flamingo 16:37, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Great idea, I didn't like that section either, when I looked her up on wikipedia she seemed like a nice creative person. Why don't you do the honors, and that would make room for the pic on the talk page too! Al just logged on, but still abour 7 minutes later. You must have called through your psychic powers.

Mind Voting for this

Mind voting for this. Appreciate it!--If you're 555 then I'm Talk What's it like to be a heretic? 01:12, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

I'll take a look at it a bit later, haven't done so as yet although I saw it was nommed. You've been doing some very good writing lately. Can I give suggetions or tweeks if I find need or room for them on the page? I am a wise Latina woman, living in the body of a primitive Australian cannibal. Al 6:66 66 6 XIXIXI

Thanks for the comment, and yeah you can suggest/tweek it a bit.--If you're 555 then I'm Talk What's it like to be a heretic? 01:26, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

I like the changes, makes the article even better. Good job!--If you're 555 then I'm Talk What's it like to be a heretic? 02:44, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, I didn't know if you would. I like your picture of Ol'Red with the popped-eyes! I'll get back to it, but not now. No mas, no mas. And I smell food. Al 6:66 66 6 VIVIVI

Fried Chicken

Review is complete. Check it out when you get a moment. It was by far the hardest one I've ever done and now I have to kick my dog around to vent my frustrations. I hope your satisfied. --—John Lydon 14:13, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Advertising

No matter how reluctant Wikia are to say "never" and no matter how hard they may try they cannot bypass the Non Commercial Licence which contributions to Uncyclopedia are released under. It is interesting to note one "Jimmy Wales" who appears on the Board of Directors for Creative Commons - "The co-founder of the Wikimedia Foundation, a non-profit corporation which operates Wikipedia and several other wiki projects. Wales is also founder of the for-profit company Wikia, Inc. (legally unrelated to Wikimedia)." who is the spitting image of Jimbo Wales. I think its fair to comment that should Creative Commons move to be far more "flexible" with the interpretation of how licences work, especially where it could benefit a member of the Creative Commons Board of Directors, would open up a shitstorm that would instantly destroy their credibility, which means that we are VERY unlikely to ever see advertising on Uncyclopedia. Hope that clears the matter up for you.... -- Sir Mhaille  (talk to me)

You sound like the voice of a prophet, a good prophet, one who loves his people. And it shall be so! And congrats on aninchaway from your 40th. Modus feels your breath on his neck, and he is probably aware of the feature race too. Al later that same year.

Frat

I was glad to see that you understood the point of what I was trying to say in the review. I had a hell of a time trying to get it across. As far as the frat goes, This is new info to me. I was not aware that such an orginization existed or how to go about contacting said orinization. This isn't the cabal is it?? --—John Lydon 14:25, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

I still don't know how to contact it either, seriously, I always have to look around to find its many pages. Skinfan has lots of links, I think, and the Taco page should take you somewhere in the vicinity. See, one of the initiation rites is to find it! Al Look, it's on your roof! (If it was the cabal we couldn't tell you, so I can't tell you)

Check out the table of contents on the frat's home page, Upsilon Sigma Sigma, to find the request to join section. any questions, feel free to drop by my talk page! -- Sir SF13 (Talk) GUN WotM RotM FBotM VFH SK Maj. ΥΣΣ 17:13 EST 1 July, 2010

Ol'Red

Do you think you can do more on Ol' Red today, or has that dog worked you out?--If you're 555 then I'm Talk What's it like to be a heretic? 21:18, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Ol'Red tracked me down and brought me back to the prison. So my time on the computer is limited to one minute per hour. But I will try. Fuckin' ol'Red, I'd like to take him out back and do him in. Al, killin' ol'Red moments later

Looking better. Also don't forget to vote--If you're 555 then I'm Talk What's it like to be a heretic? 01:04, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Still doing stuff. Glad you like it. I watched the video, that was fun too. Al moments in the future

ROTM

Thanks! I, HELPME, thank you for voting me to be ROTM for June 2010. Your support is appreciated. Now that I have ROTM, I have an excuse to do nothing, so I'm even happier! My master procrastination plan is working! YES!!!

And special thanks for the nom.--Sir HELPME Talk (more? --> CUN ROTM NOTM Pleb USS Pees SK ) On Thursday, 01:18, July 01 2010 UTC

Pissant. Al now

With sincere thanks

Foolitzer thanks with a debt of gratitude!

--Funnybony    14:37, Jul 1

Hiyah!

ΥΣΣ Collaboration: Chicken

This person was a principal contributor to the May, 2010 ΥΣΣ Collaboration, helping Upsilon Sigma Sigma create Top 50 Requested content.

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thanks for all the help this month, I'll be sure to put a bunch more time and effort into this thing now that I have absolutely no commitments left this summer outside of work. Would you be interested in being the Marshal of the frat? you get a fancy rank and template and you get to boss people around if you wish. -- Sir SF13 (Talk) GUN WotM RotM FBotM VFH SK Maj. ΥΣΣ 17:11 EST 1 July, 2010

Hi, and I hope your return went well. Do you miss the sites already? Nah, but thanks. Marshal Chains just sounds a little too ominous, and would make me hide my head under the covers (which I do whenever I watch CSI or Bones). And I'll do more on Chicken within the day, per the pee review. Saw that Tim Burton is on the voteforfeature cue. Maybe he'll log on himself and vote for it. Welcome back! Alesiter 22:14 1 7 MMX

UOTM

Thanks for voting for me on UOTM. I didn't win, but the fact that I got a decent amount of votes means a lot to me. It's good to know that you guys actually think someone like me is useful. So, yeah.--Sir HELPME Talk (more? --> CUN ROTM NOTM Pleb USS Pees SK ) On Saturday, 03:38, July 03 2010 UTC

A wild sexual encounter appeared!

Innocence lost... —fj0j3ddjoaw;rfjaew (r30qjd) 16:56, 24 July 2010 (UTC)

Behind the Template

'FROM THE DESK OF GUILDENSTERNENSTEIN'

Thank you for supporting my recently featured article.

I, like, appreciate your support, or something.

—Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 01:59, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

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Keith

Thanks for the nom. I hope Keith has this site on his watch list. --RomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate) 17:27, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

3.14

Pie, it's gross.

Anyways we should schedule a showdown for 5 people with 5 judges. They will give a score to each, best total score wins. All the other rules still apply.

And dude where did your old talk page go? When you archive you leave a link...you did archive it, not just erase the whole thing, right? --Happymonkey39 Dah Meme Master 01:41, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

It's underneath the turtle, that's where the links for my archives are. Aren't everyones? That would be fun, but how would five people give each other article names. Pass them down to the left? We can work it out though. Hey, did you see Lyhterya is going on "vacation"? Did you chase her away? Running down the street screaming again? Dibs on her parking spot. Al few minutes later

Hey, nobody's taking my parking spot! My giant undead flamingo from hell is staying right where it is! ~ Apheori *shifty eyes* (talk) (stalk) -- 20100727 - 02:00 (UTC)

"Giant Undead Flamingo From Hell". Now that would be a great topic for an article. Or a movie, sounds like one of those 1950s radiation insects on the attack movies. A few weeks ago I was at a zoo and saw one of the zookeepers or workers or whatever "steal" a flamingo egg from atop it's mother's mud nest. They had chased the mother off the nest with food and commotion, and this girl zookeeper was hiding behind something and then sneaked out and took the egg. The mother was all aflutter about it. True story too. Aleister 2:07 27 7

uhu...nice story? And take the article name...Moving on. I think we shoulcd have it before Lyrithya leaves, as a "thank god she's leavening" competition. And let's make that 2 or 3 judges, 5 is too many. --Happymonkey39 Dah Meme Master 02:44, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

here are some competitor ideas, bold are confirmed:

• happymonkey39
• Aleister
• Lyrithya
• Happytimes forget it, just remembered, he don't write nothing for no one
• Paizuri
• Lordarcadian

(and anyone else who feels like playing)

As for Judges

• HELPME
• happytimes
• RabbiTechno

That's a brainstorm. And i did the planing last time. YOU DO IT, this time. Besides nearly anyone replied :P. --Happymonkey39 Dah Meme Master 02:44, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Hi. I don't know, how about early next week, but it should be at 10 or 10:30 your time. The big contest a month or so ago that Ape organized started at midnight your time, which didn't really work for me but I played anyway. Tell you what, you pick a day, like Monday or Tuesday next week, and then we can organize it up real good before then. Give it some time to look forward to it. Who knows, more people may want to join, or may not. This would be the one where we give each other an exact title a minute before kick-off, then write for an hour-and-fifteen minutes. Let me knows what you thinks (and hopefully Lyrithya will be around for it, that would be fun) Aleister 22:57 27 7

Well she stalks me...wait? She stalks me...I CAN GET LAID! Yes! i just hope she ain't ugly. I say Monday. I hope i will be available at that day. I know for a fact that i wont on Tuesday, don't ask why. And yes, all the same rules apply like i said, why don't you send some invites to the people i listed for the competition. We'll worry about the judges later. --Happymonkey39 Dah Meme Master 23:45, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Ugly? Eh... well, once all the plastic surgery is done, I should be a right dame. Like that one in Brazil, you know, the guy's mother... whatever was her name? Anyways, you shant be seeing me until after the surgeon is done. And don't you worry, either; he's not one of those that uses acid treatment. He assures me my complication will certainly not develop a complication.

Oh! Deary me, is it that time already? I'll be right back; I need to change the bandages...

Well, that got a little messy, but anyhoo, all's well now. I may even get some hair back soon. So what's all this about a contest, anyhow? And don't you worry; I decided I left a few days ago but probably won't actually leave until I randomly wander off at some point. The {{vacation}} thing is just to cover for whenever I do, I guess... ~ Apheori *shifty eyes* (talk) (stalk) -- 20100728 - 00:01 (UTC)

OK, how about we firm it up for Monday for sure, 10 p.m. your time (Eastern North America) and 2:00 on UIC time. And when Monday comes around try not to meet any new women to talk to that night. Lyrithya, do you want to play too? People will give each other a specific title of a new article, then you have an hour and 15 minutes to write it. When it's over, I don't know, if we have lots of people judging isn't really cool as much as what occurred last time, if a page would survive on VFD it's a good page. And I saw Lyrithya after the plastic surgery, now one eye is larger and her mouth is reallll straight and long, just like the image she always leaves. But it looks good, yeah, it's Okay. I like big eye(s), at least one of them is big, and straight mouths. Does anyone else want to play next Monday, if that's what we decided? Aleister 00:19 28 7

Well i just so happenly placed links to the people on the list for you. Im sorry Al, but people don't check your page often, no one will see that. I think you should click those links i spent 10 minutes making!

Huh...image before she leaves...that's a neat idea. I mean what if before people "officially" ditched uncylopedia, they showed a pic of themselves...that would be neat...yet again, you get there IP...and then stalk...but she already does that so... --Happymonkey39 Dah Meme Master 02:31, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Agh! Al! Don't peek! Wait until after the plastic wrap comes off, dammit! Although if all else fails I suppose I could get a picture by googling 'cute asian chick' and using whatever comes up...

And sure, I'll take part... if I remember. I guess it'll be a matter of if I show up. If not, go on without me, obviously. ~ Apheori *shifty eyes* (talk) (stalk) -- 20100728 - 04:21 (UTC)

Dude

How about THIS? Cheers!--Funnybony    22:06, Jul 27

Good page!! Might need a little more work, but initially, very good. Love the pic, well, both pics. Aleister 00:21 28 7

Upsilon Sigma Sigma July Newsletter

Well guys, its been exactly 5 billion years since I last did a newsletter and I thought doing one would be a good way to get everyone back into the fold for August. Big things on the horizon for August for Upsilon Sigma Sigma.

First thing's first: Welcome to our newest brothers, Maniac1075 and Happymonkey39! Hopefully you guys will stick around and become regular contributors to our little project here!

Secondly, unfortunately there wasn't really a July collaboration. That's partly my fault from being absent most of the month because of work. The June collaboration, Taco, that got roughly finished and reviewed around mid-July will be our collaboration for both months. Go ahead and head on over to the collaboration page to vote on whether we send the article to mainspace or not and be sure to nominate an article for the que, also found on the collaboration page.

Third, some asshole (cough MadMax) redirected weird to odd, but bad news for him; we're doing weird as our collaboration for August anyways. This one is going to be epic guys, like Tim Burton epic. I'd like an 'all hands on deck' turnout for this one. We'll begin sometime around August 1 or second. I was thinking the approach for the article should be from the perspective of a high school misfit who's unaware how weird he is describing other kids as being weird. or something... Once the collaboration page is up and running we'll hash it out on the discussion page.

Lastly, and I know I constantly pound this, we all need to start doing requested articles individually. This is supposed to be a big part of USS, but our frat has morphed into mainly a collaboration group. Lets try and focus on those individual requested articles over the next few months.

Looking forward to ramping this thing back into gear with you guys in August!

Founder -- Sir SF13 (Talk) GUN WotM RotM FBotM VFH SK Maj. ΥΣΣ 21:37 EST 28 July, 2010