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Article: UnBooks:The Miseries of Uncyclopedia Life

Score: 3 beautifully crafted Victorian handmirrors

Nominated by: Mhaille
For: 9
  1. Very fine contribution from Little Egypt herself. For. -- Sir Mhaille Icons-flag-gb.png (talk to me)
  2. For. Too many chuckles of recognition not to vote for. --SirU.U.Esq. VFH | GUN | Natter | Uh oh | Pee 20:54, Mar 10
  3. Weak For As per what Ljlego said, a lot of n00bs might not get this. But then again, who cares. --THE 23:14, 10 March 2008 (UTC)
  4. For per my Pee Review. --Nekami 02:31, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
  5. For ~Jewriken.GIF 21:18, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
  6. For --Sir Starnestommy Icons-flag-us.png (TalkContribsCUN) 21:56, Mar. 12, 2008
  7. For --DyslexicRetard 10:26, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
  8. For my own work and those who get it. Helpful suggestions welcomed and will be undertaken. Dame PPsigPPlips.gifGUN PotY WotM 2xPotM 17xVFH VFP Poo PMS •YAP• 21:45, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
  9. For What the hell?-Sir Ljlego, GUN VFH FIYC WotM SG WHotM PWotM AotM EGAEDM ANotM + (Talk) 17:20, 16 March 2008 (UTC)
Against: 6
  1. Against. Unfortunately, reading the article felt like treading through molasses: a slow, sticky, and consequently tiresome foray into unfun-abetes. Mightydandylion 07:26, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
  2. As of now, I must be against. I may rescind my vote if: 1. There is correct comma usage (especially prior to dialogue). Example: "Encountering an uppity community member who can not write, and refuses to contribute to anything constructive, instead preferring to assail and degrade everyone else’s work with rude comments and negative voting." This sentence is funky. It could/should be reworded to something like: "Encountering an uppity community member who can not write and refuses to contribute to anything constructive in preference of assailing and degrading everyone else's work with rude comments and negative voting." It seems as though the tone is slightly stilted...the grammar and punctuation should be more refined to make the effect on more than just the "big words" level. 2. The chapter subheadings are inconsistent (not sure if this is intentional; I'm just focusing on mechanics right now) with dashes, commas, and colons all being used ("Chapter One – Creative Prolapse", "Chapter Three: The Unwelcome Mat in the IRC", "Chapter Four, The Cabal"). 3. Lastly, the "See also" section should be expanded. --EMC [TALK] 02:19, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
    {{Sofixit}}
    {{Too lazy}}
  3. Against. Not that funny and lacks structure. Could be funnier... -- Luverly - (Contribs) (Talk) Heart anim.gif Brainwashed to be British and then some. Certifiably MORE British than You. Grammar Nazi, Mum , BFF & NotM, CUN , GMP . - Perkele! 21:16, 12 Mar
  4. Against: I was going to say for, but chapter 6, being a disorganized list, ruined this. Marshal Uncyclopedian! Talk to me! 01:36, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
  5. Sorry Mizz P. Not so hot on this one. --Littleboyonly.jpg TKFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFUJewriken.GIFCK Oldmanonly.jpg 01:40, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
  6. Against -RAHB 19:57, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
Comments
  • Abstain No offense meant, Ms. Pretty, but I do believe that too much of the humor derives from having lived through it. Which, you know, a lot of people haven't.--Sir Ljlego, GUN VFH FIYC WotM SG WHotM PWotM AotM EGAEDM ANotM + (Talk) 21:10, 10 March 2008 (UTC)
  • Abstain If you add another pic, and maybe try to do something about the fact that it's largely a series of lists, I'm happy to vote for this. It is funny. Maybe combine the lists a little and use bullet points? I just don't like the formatting. MrN MrN9000SouthParksmall.jpg 00:39, Mar 12
I would suggest that you look at the book Miseries of Human Life [1] by James Beresford, upon which I based this unbook upon. The unbook is written in the exact fashion as the original, and thus an "uncyclopediac satire". To write it as prose with full sentences, paragraphs, analysis as you feel it should be done would make it unlike the original and thus not a parody of original, or Uncyclopedia "in" jokes, would it? Dame PPsigPPlips.gifGUN PotY WotM 2xPotM 17xVFH VFP Poo PMS •YAP• 21:45, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
  • Conditional. Someone tell me if that second to the last one about the thong is about Olipro. And if it is, that doesn't necessarily mean I'll vote for it. And I'm not saying it'll make me vote against it, either. I just need to know before I can vote. ~Minitrue Sir SysRq! Talk! Sex! =/ GUNWotMRotMAotMVFHSKPEEINGHPBFF @ 01:38 Mar 17
Its actually about you in the Thong. We have pictures. Dame PPsigPPlips.gifGUN PotY WotM 2xPotM 17xVFH VFP Poo PMS •YAP• 19:43, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
Oh yeah, I remember now. I had the crabcakes. ~Minitrue Sir SysRq! Talk! Sex! =/ GUNWotMRotMAotMVFHSKPEEINGHPBFF @ 21:58 Mar 17

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