Uncyclopedia:VFH/Worst 100 Pick-Up Lines of All Time

Article: Worst 100 Pick-Up Lines of All Time	Score: -3 Failed Pick-up attempts
Nominated by:	Dexter111344 00:19, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
For: 4	Nom+For And why not? --Dexter111344 00:19, 26 August 2007 (UTC) For --*Sir* Starnestommy (Talk • Contribs • CUN • Capt.) 00:21, August 26, 2007 For --YeOldeLuke 01:01, 26 August 2007 (UTC) For. For. --Nescirian 06:10, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
Against: 7	Strong Against To listy, not enough images, and although Worst 100 Ways to Deliver Bad News was featured and is a list as well, that has more variety and pictures than this. This simply is a list of pick-up lines and doesn't have much of anything else--*Sir* Manforman 00:27, 26 August 2007 (UTC) Strong Against for a completely different reason than Manforman (i.e.: "Too listy" >_> It's a damned giant list!), but also as per Manforman (more variety, pictures, etc). First of all, the majority of the lines aren't funny, and the list itself is pretty badly formatted. -- TKFU U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U UU U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U CK 02:07, 26 August 2007 (UTC) Strong Against - Per Manforman & TKF. --AAA! (AAAA) 02:27, 26 August 2007 (UTC) Against. Has funny bits, lots of them, but has way too much that needs to be formatted & weeded out first. Till then, no. – Sir Skullthumper, MD (criticize • writings • critchat) 02:45 Aug 26, 2007 Against. Per AAA. Actually, prrr AAA. Good kitty. Sir Modusoperandi ^Boinc! 06:41, 26 August 2007 (UTC) Against As per <insert name here> -RA HB 08:04, 26 August 2007 (UTC) Against This is not front page material, right now its just a list, with layout issues. Dame GUN PotY WotM 2xPotM 17xVFH VFP Poo PMS •YAP• 14:36, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
Comments	Abs There are some really funny parts to this list. But, as of right now, it's just not ready for feature-dom. Re-read the list. First off, there are those really funny parts, but there are also the mediocre parts. Remove the mediocre parts. Then, format the list better. It'll take a while, but you should make the pickup lines get more and more absurd as the list progresses. You should make the list have an actual ending at number 1 or 0, so that it feels conclusive (see here). Other than that, there are a few prose issues you may want to fix, so fix them. This'll take time, but it'll be worth it if you want your list to be truly great. P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon (Tick Tock) (Contribs) 03:14, Aug 26, 2007 Better yet, make it the Six Worst Pick-Up Lines of All Time, with pics, commentary, background and stories. Sir Modusoperandi ^Boinc! 06:41, 26 August 2007 (UTC)