Uncyclopedia:VFH/UnPoetia:Poems that don't rhyme (2nd nomination)

Article: UnPoetia:Poems that don't rhyme	Score: *-3 Which rhymes with elephant.*
Nominated by:	05:05, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
For: 4	Self nom + for This is a collab between Shabidoo and I. He took it to new heights, and for that I thank him. Hope you all like it. Thanks. -- 05:05, July 31, 2011 (UTC) For. I love this -- Sir Xam Ralco the Mediocre 15:46, July 31, 2011 (UTC) For. A few of the lines went over my head but it's still good. HauntedUndies. 10:36, August 1, 2011 (UTC) For.--EpicAwesomeness (talk) 06:38, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Against: 7	wtf is this shit EugeneKay wuz here (whine thank) 08:07, Sunday 31 July 2011 Um... okay. Well do you have any suggestions on how we can maybe fix it up? Thanks. -- 14:10, July 31, 2011 (UTC) Against. It's a good idea but I don't think it's ready, personally. Maybe a picture and an introduction (in prose) might help flesh it out.. Nameable • mumble? 14:29, July 31, 2011 (UTC) What do you mean by introduction? Do you mean a beginning part explaining about the poem? Or making the poem longer by adding to the beginning? -- 16:07, July 31, 2011 (UTC) A good idea for sure, but needs a few more steps and stuff. First off, don't put in a prose introduction, just the poem's good enough I think, but the poem itself needs fixin'. Some lines feel very forced to fit the meter/non-rhyming scheme, and a picture would always be good too. TKFU U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U UU U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U CK 16:13, July 31, 2011 (UTC) Well, yaknow, I was gonna be nice and vote vor it becuase I'm friends with you guys....but, I noticed that you hate me + Shabi keeps spamming my talk page + once I read it I caught on fire, so I have to get an extinguisher before my hand is incinerated. Nice try. ^{→ (Der_Führerbunker--Wehrmacht Factories)} 13:50, August 1, 2011 (UTC) So out of respect for our totally unbiased voting system, would anyone object if I strike this fella from the record? -- TKFU U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U UU U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U CK 02:19, August 2, 2011 (UTC) Against. Sorry. ~Sir Frosty (Talk to me!) 06:39, August 2, 2011 (UTC) Against. Didn't hit me with the funny stick. Funky Monk 10:05, August 2, 2011 (UTC) Against -- The Zombiebaron 05:38, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
Comments	Abstain. I dunno. —Sir Socky (talk) (stalk) GUN SotM UotM PMotM UotY PotM WotM 17:26, 31 July 2011 Abstain. I like it, but it could use more. Perhaps an audio would help? --Black Flamingo 21:46, July 31, 2011 (UTC) Good idea! Would anyone be willing to do that? -- 22:11, July 31, 2011 (UTC)