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Article: HowTo:Build the Perfect Sandcastle	Score: 12.5 epic stories with sharks in them
Nominated by:	SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 21:10, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
For: 14.5	nom & for. don't go to the beach without it! SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 21:10, 4 May 2009 (UTC) Yay! Self For! without a doubt my favourite thing I've written. ~Orian57~ ~Talk~ 21:20 4 May 2009 Strong For- Though normally I am not the world's biggest fan of 1st person narrative articles, it is done very, very well here. Made for a very enjoying read.-- You know what the music means... Our time is up. 21:59, 4 May 2009 (UTC) For. Atomik Spongeface • Ⓣ Ⓒ 00:25, 5 May 2009 (UTC) For. Good job, son. JackOfSpades (talk) 02:30, 5 May 2009 (UTC) For. Way to go Mr. ILuvManAss. That's not discriminating against gays, he just left pictures of lots of asses on my page. Smokin' Cheddar BBQ: The King of the Triangular Snackfoods 02:39, 5 May 2009 (UTC) For. 59.167.101.42 08:58, 5 May 2009 (UTC) For. -OptyC Sucks! CUN14:08, 5 May For. Orian wrote this? Whoa! I thought this was a Modus piece! • • • Necropaxx (T) {~} 15:19, May 5 The Perfect For. —Sir Socky (talk) (stalk) GUN SotM UotM PMotM UotY PotM WotM 15:35, 5 May 2009 (UTC) I WANNA SWIM IN THE SEA!!! Oh right the sharks, thank god daddy was there to remind me. ~SirTagstit • VFH • NotM • PEEING • CPT • RotM • BFF 16:36, 5 May 2009 (UTC) For. Dame 16:38, 5 May 2009 (UTC) For. I want to have children just like that. With Orian. --Pleb SYNDROME CUN medicate (butt poop!!!!) 02:52, 6 May 2009 (UTC) For Yodel monkey 15:55, 6 May 2009 (UTC) Yay! Voting is fun. - [20:54 6 May 2009] PlebYettie
Against: 2	Against on opinion I just became bored half way through. It felt like an extended yuky doody and lacked the refinement of a Pufflebump Snugglekins. --Sir DJ ~ Irreverent 08:28, 6 May 2009 (UTC) Against. per above. --Docile hippopotamus 08:37, 6 May 2009 (UTC) Comment: I don't think this is meant to be a yuky doody or Pufflebump Snugglekins. It is more of a story making fun of how distracted children can be. ~SirTagstit • VFH • NotM • PEEING • CPT • RotM • BFF 15:12, 6 May 2009 (UTC) Yeah, I mean, I know it's just your opinion but I really don't see where it came from, I don't see how it is at all like Yucky Doody, maybe it is like Pufflebump Snugglekins but I would say the opposite and that it's more refined. but yeah, Tags' idea is what I was going for. ~Orian57~ ~Talk~ 15:19 6 May 2009 I'd blame this line mainly - “I don’t make the rules.” I shrugged. And then I pood. “I know something that’s sticky.” I said. - then the story gets much better after the second read, not overly funny but a good read. Change that line and I'd give it a definite For. --Sir DJ ~ Irreverent 15:43, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
Comments	Abstain. Mnb'z 05:43, 5 May 2009 (UTC) Abstain. Has ideas and looks promising but I don't know if it is VFH. But I am not going to vote against. --Romartus 17:59, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

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