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| Article: UnScripts:OH SHIT!!!! I Fucked My Girlfriend's Mother!!!!
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Score: -4 times I fucked my girlfriends mother--If you're 555 then I'm  Talk What's it like to be a heretic? 04:09, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
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If you're 555 then I'm Talk What's it like to be a heretic? 04:09, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
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For: 4
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 Nom & Fucking For I really enjoyed making this. It has been Pee reviewed and I made changes from it. Enjoy!--If you're 555 then I'm Talk What's it like to be a heretic? 04:09, December 24, 2010 (UTC)- For. I love it! But it definitely needs some touching-up before getting featured. Scofield 09:36, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
- Hah. Mrowa 10:42, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
- For and Spiritual For Made me laugh and held my interest. This isn't so bad that a little work, a few additions, and a few seconds to jack-off won't solve. Aleister 13:37 24 12
For. --M&M (christmas mood)  16:11, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
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- Against. Needs more work for me. The style just doesn't work and where it is supposed to come off as funny, I find it is coming across as juvenile. No upset intended, but I don't see this as an FA. ChiefjusticePSX 07:09, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
- There are too many exclamation marks in the title!!!! And the article itself is poorly executed and visually unappealing. -- The Zombiebaron 07:13, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
 Nah. —Sir Socky   (talk) (stalk)  GUN SotM UotM PMotM UotY PotM WotM 07:18, 24 December 2010- Against. This belongs to VFD not VFH. Hiroyoshi 13:31, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
- Sticks and stones can break Iwillkillyou333's bones, but words will just get him angry and Hewillkillyou. Aleister 13:38 24 12
- That's right, bitch. Besides, this ain't even close to be VFD material.--If you're 555 then I'm Talk What's it like to be a heretic? 02:21, December 25, 2010 (UTC)
- Against. Terrible. Needs a complete re-working. Sycamore (Talk) 14:33, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
- Juvenile subject and execution aside, there are way too many exclamation points. Rather vain, too... 1234 ~
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- Hilarious title.....and not a whole lot else. --Roman Dog Bird 22:29, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
- Against. You build all that up and right at the end she just says that she knew about it all along? Then they have a three-way? How can you do this to me, man?! Worst plot idea ever! --Wilytank can be a pain in the ass. 18:33, December 25, 2010 (UTC)
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- Comment: Take the criticism in stride and fix the article. My first turnoff is seeing the Russian reversal quote - way too cliche. Since the title lends itself to a juvenile rant, wouldn't it be surprising and perhaps amusing if it were written Shakespeare style or with some form of highbrow prose? Just a suggestion. Take another shot, surprise everyone and get it into the net. I know you can do it.--
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04:09, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
Nom & Fucking For I really enjoyed making this. It has been Pee reviewed and I made changes from it. Enjoy!--
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