| Article: Claire Redfield
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Score: -4
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 WILL YOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 07:36, November 16, 2009 (UTC)
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For: 1
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- Self+NomChanges since second review, if this doesnt work I will go with changes in the recent Third Review--WILLYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 07:36, November 16, 2009 (UTC)
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Against: 5
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- Neh. It could be cleaned up some more. The in-jokes & quotes aren't helping much. • • • Necropaxx (T) {~} Tuesday, 02:24, Nov 17 2009
- Against. As an article it's ok I guess (though as it links to a parody on You Tube so I don't know if this is that original). The main problem for me is that you will understand most of it only if you have played this game. This means for everyone else the approach will be 'don't know it' and ' don't care'. The writer has to find a way to connect this article to the outside world to get a VFH in my view.
 RomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate) 07:14, November 17, 2009 (UTC)
- Against. Didn't really like, also noticed several grammatical errors. Black Flamingo 13:09, November 17, 2009 (UTC)
 Sorry Ah... I remember this. But you still skipped a lot of the suggestions I made in the 1st review way back when. Not ready yet. Che  } 00:55,18November,2009- Needs more work. It starts out rather well, but at "Personal Life" it starts going downhill. —Sir Socky
   (talk) (stalk)  GUN SotM UotM PMotM UotY PotM WotM 02:00, 18 November 2009
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VFH
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WILL
YOU 333 07:36, November 16, 2009 (UTC)
Sorry Ah... I remember this. But you still skipped a lot of the suggestions I made in the 1st review way back when. Not ready yet. 
