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Article: A Day With My Son	Score: 12.5
Nominated by:	Just to see how far it goes. --Sir Oliphaunte (განხილვა)   22:30, March 9, 2011 (UTC)
For: 13.5	For. I really enjoyed this. Dr. Fenwick 05:40, March 10, 2011 (UTC)  For. —Sir Socky (talk) (stalk) GUN SotM UotM PMotM UotY PotM WotM 22:46, 10 March 2011 For. This is very well done. Could do without the 'or 20-40' at the end though. mAttlobster. (hello) 13:46, March 12, 2011 (UTC) For. I was fearing a paedo angle to all of this but it was only about killing policemen, hijacking and bank robbery. Phew...! RomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate) 14:30, March 12, 2011 (UTC)  For. -- Lost Labyrinth • (t) • (c) • (a) 16:35, March 12, 2011 (UTC) For. nice! ShabiDOO 18:24, March 12, 2011 (UTC) For. i love you! SON! Lockdandload 12:56, March 14, 2011 (UTC) I think I recall reading this and I think I recall it amusing me. Or something. 1234 ~ 09:51, 15 March 2011 For. Hilarious 86.164.84.255 18:35, March 15, 2011 (UTC) he just loved to live that way, and he loved to steal your money. --Black Flamingo 00:22, March 16, 2011 (UTC) For. Just to keep this alive... --Sir Oliphaunte (განხილვა)   19:50, March 20, 2011 (UTC) For. Lets do it! Funnybony    14:25, Mar 23 14:25, March 23, 2011 (UTC) For. Brings back so many fond childhood memories. Sniff. King of the Internet Alden Loveshade??? (royal court)  04:57, March 31, 2011 (UTC) For. Just sneaks it, for me. --UU - natter 08:40, Mar 31  Hi-la-ri-ous! Cat the Colourful (Feed Me!!!)Leave me alone... 11:45, March 31, 2011
Against: 1	Against. Sorry, the words to grins ratio was too high for me. pillow talk 17:36, March 20, 2011 (UTC) ...What? --Sir Oliphaunte (განხილვა)   19:50, March 20, 2011 (UTC) Too much text for the amount of funny. Perhaps cutting down on more unfunny parts would help? I can't even remember. 1234 ~ 20:41, 20 March 2011 Ah yea, I cut down on most sentences before I put it up here, but if it isn't enough, I'll see what I can do to make it shorter..--Sir Oliphaunte (განხილვა)   18:31, March 23, 2011 Alright, cut down some parts, hope it's better now. I just don't want to get rid of too much because it's a narrative and I want it to be descriptive. Anyways, will anyone let me know if they see something else that should or can be deleted, without ruining the humour? --Sir Oliphaunte (განხილვა)   19:17, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
Comments	Comment. Reminds me in part of The Clash song Bankrobber. Was that the inspiration? RomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate) 13:42, March 12, 2011 (UTC) Maybe subconsciously, I do love that song. --Sir Oliphaunte (განხილვა)   14:52, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

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