Uncyclopedia:VFH/UnNews:Movie character fails to heed helpful advice

Article: UnNews:Movie character fails to heed helpful advice	Score: 4 Movies you've sat next to mrs. Johnson for
Nominated by:	Sonic80
For: 7	How did we not feature this one when it came out? --_Mgr. _Sir Sonic80^☭ 16:25, 13 September 2008 (UTC) For. I got a good laugh out of this one. kind of can't see it being improved, how far could you really go with it, what's there is funny Tempogain 17:15, 15 September 2008 (UTC) For. Too true, and just genius. IC-Waffles 21:02, 16 September 2008 (UTC) For people voting. --Mr. Monkey Pant-hoot here. 23:29, 16 September 2008 (UTC) Fo' . Saturnine 18:13, 20 September 2008 (UTC) Yes. • • • Necropaxx (T) {~} 23:43, Sep 20 For. HE'S IN THE ROOM, DAMMIT! Muzak 00:59, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
Against: 3	Against. Lamoxlamae 06:55, 20 September 2008 (UTC) Against. Would-be Uncyclopedia contributor fails to heed helpful advice. Megalomaniac Martin “The Unfortunately Unfeatured” Ultima • (VOTE FOR ME!) • talk • (AND MY PICS TOO!) • contribs 23:33, 20 September 2008 (UTC) against. i feel like this one didn't reach it's full potential, and could have had a much better ending. SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 15:12, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
Comments	~~Hold off, perhaps.~~ Vote, but read the following first. I wrote this and I wasn't particularly proud of it. So So visited my talk page and offered to rewrite it with some of his own ideas. Henceforth, this article is still sort of a work in progress, so pay attention to this: If you vote against, add something that would help So So and I improve it. Thanks. --Mr. Monkey Pant-hoot here. 17:55, 13 September 2008 (UTC) I will hold off, though I like the piece quite a lot. I might suggest a stronger link into the last line...after Leland tells Johnson to shut up she screams something movie-related ("You one of dem zombified corpses dat eats brains! You ain't eatin' MY brains!" or "You looks like Freddy Kruger. You IS Freddy Kruger!" or something). And what would Mrs. Johnson do with, oh I don't know, Star Wars? "Luke! You dam' fool! He your FATHER!" Or Juno -- "DON'T HAVE THE BABY, BITCH! Flush that dam' thang!" Or The Passion of Christ? "Don't go in dat garden, Jesus! Them Romans gonna arrest you! Shit! Quit preachin' and get yourself an attorney, fool!" I encourage you to keep working on this. It's a great idea and is fun to read. ----OEJ 18:45, 13 September 2008 (UTC) Oh, well, feel free to vote for, I'm just saying that Against votes should take the fact that it's got room for improvement into account. Also, thanks for the advice! That'd be good for a fake reference to an "old" news story... --Mr. Monkey Pant-hoot here. 18:48, 13 September 2008 (UTC) This is VFH not Pee Review though. If a user thinks it's not ready they are entitled to vote against. Unfortunately I don't think we can start enforcing that voters have to say why they vote a given way. Much as that would be nice... Mr N 17:20, Sep 15 He's not saying that people can't vote against, he's just asking that they give he and So So some advice on how to improve it. – Sir Skullthumper, MD (criticize • writings • critchat) 17:22 Sep 15, 2008 Yeah, more or less. I could just cross all of it out and let it be ignored, though, or delete it. By which I mean my comments. --Mr. Monkey Pant-hoot here. 23:29, 16 September 2008 (UTC)