Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Peter Dinklage
Peter Dinklage[edit source]
Such a talented little child. He's got big things ahead of him. --
12:13, May 12, 2011 (UTC)- JordanOng took a stab at it, but I'm really feeling a second opinion. --
- I'll do it, but give me 3 or 4 days since I am busy also with the competition. Mattsnow 05:43, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
- I started doing it on my userspace ( I read it numerous time, it is a big part of the piss process) I said 3 or 4 days, but it's going to be like a week. If I were you, TKF, I'd rather have a deep one, but it's gonna take time. I am sorry about it, but you can expect it to be done by the 12th. I have stuff to do, my vacations + the competitions (when I get on a PC it is because I said I would do so. I understand this is an unusual timeline to do a Pee, but I'll do it. I just feel "engaged" to my comp team as of now, and to vacations in my fucking life. I hope you can understand that I love Uncy, but maybe my competition thing + my work + my life with my buddies... Maybe you get it. Peace! Mattsnow 04:32, August 7, 2011 (UTC) 04:31, August 7, 2011 (UTC)
- Hey i mean like take however long you need to take, I do things too --
- I think I was drunk a bit when I typed that, if I remember last night well LMFAO. One hell of a hangover this morning LOL. But as I said, on the way, slowly but surely... Mattsnow 14:14, August 7, 2011 (UTC)
08:10, August 7, 2011 (UTC)
- Hey i mean like take however long you need to take, I do things too --
- I started doing it on my userspace ( I read it numerous time, it is a big part of the piss process) I said 3 or 4 days, but it's going to be like a week. If I were you, TKF, I'd rather have a deep one, but it's gonna take time. I am sorry about it, but you can expect it to be done by the 12th. I have stuff to do, my vacations + the competitions (when I get on a PC it is because I said I would do so. I understand this is an unusual timeline to do a Pee, but I'll do it. I just feel "engaged" to my comp team as of now, and to vacations in my fucking life. I hope you can understand that I love Uncy, but maybe my competition thing + my work + my life with my buddies... Maybe you get it. Peace! Mattsnow 04:32, August 7, 2011 (UTC) 04:31, August 7, 2011 (UTC)
16:41, May 31, 2011 (UTC)
- I'll do it, but give me 3 or 4 days since I am busy also with the competition. Mattsnow 05:43, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Humour: | 8 | It will be a pleasure to do this since it has been sitting here for so long lol. First of all, I have to say I don't know at all who Peter Dinklage is or if he exists only in your imagination, so bear in mind you have the opinion of a Peter Dinklage n00b. UPDATE!: I just saw on Wikipedia that he exist, but I didn't read anything. I put some suggestions in to the best of my abilities, I hope it sparks ideas, although there isn't that much since it's hard to improve a good article, I'm pretty sure this is why it sit on Pee Review for so long!
IntroIt kinda gives the childish tone the article has throughout, I like the kind of juvenile excitement, however, it could use another joke or 2, something only 9 year olds do for exemple, I don't know, like " Yesterday, when I was washing my trucks in my miniature garage, I realized I'M FAMOUS!" I can't really give an opinion on the Jordan Prentice joke because I don't know who it is, living in a backward country as I do! :) It may be funny to those who know him. My LifeStraight "E's LOL, Here again I don't know about Jordan Prentice but it is funny nonetheless. Maybe there: "mean sometimes though, since they call me mean names", 2 "means are really close toether, think about another childish synonym. The whole pragraph is OK, and I really can't think of a suggestion there. In the my parents thing, "spending" could become "wasting in useful ways" lol My beardThen again, it's all good. I just have a small problem with " She made me apologize to him but he never showed up to school on Monday" Shouldn't it be "She wanted me to... so on? I mean, since he never saw him again? My moviesWeak suggestion there: "I've done everything from playing a dwarf (which is like a small man who holds a big sword) to a midget (which is like a dwarf without a sword) to a hobbit (which is like a midget with a ring.) The elf thing is ridiculously funny. "really bad apple juice" LMAO ConclusionLOL, once again I feel cheap for not whining. |
Concept: | 8.5 | Good concept lol, this midget guy is hilarious and the fact that the tone is so childish is awesome! It reminds be a little bit of the infamous Lollipop tone, but with one actually doing it on purpose! Seriously, it was hard for me to suggest stuff to improve there, I almost gave up. It's kinda hard for me to put an objective score on this because I don't know him, though it seems to be a great concept since that actor has a lot of potential for being a great lulz subject. You seem to like him, could I be right? It's great, because a lot of people on here seem to think it is necessary to bash someone in order to be funny. Skillful writers can make an encensing article, |
Prose and formatting: | 9 | As always with your articles, the prose is top-notch, I could not find a single typo. On the formatting side, it's nice when you put 2 pics of the same size together like you did at the end, although I don't really like the one on the right. (see below) |
Images: | 8 | In general, I like the pictures.
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Miscellaneous: | 8.5 | Randomly scoring |
Final Score: | 42 | Well, if you nom this one and it doesn,t make it, then I'll know I have no taste lol. As you sure can see, I had a really hard time finding things to improve, really. It's not easy doing Pee Reviews of good articles, I hope that helped to an extent! There's always my TP to come screaming at me LOL! |
Reviewer: | Mattsnow 15:18, August 9, 2011 (UTC) |