Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Much Ado About Nothing
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Much Ado About Nothing[edit source]
First review here. I'm after a second opinion from someone with a good knowledge of Seinfeld. -- 15Mickey20 (talk to Mickey) 19:01, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
- Is this pee review necessary? Do you have a budding feeling that you must further improve this article? If not, I'd like to take this straight to VFH. -- 23:35, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
Humour: | 8.5 | It was more one of those articles that makes you smile at its cleverness than laugh out loud. Very well thought through and quite enjoyable. I got slightly lost around the middle of the plot part though, maybe you could make it a bit more out-there or Seinfeld-esque if you know what I mean. |
Concept: | 10 | Very good concept. "A show about nothing" - Much ado about nothing. Shakespeare - Seinfeld |
Prose and formatting: | 9 | Very well written and formatted. Breaking up text with quotes receives a big plus from me. |
Images: | 7.5 | The images were nothing spectacular. Solid, but not overly funny. Maybe a modern picture of Seinfeld or Kramer with "A modern representation; mind you that guy is the worst Kramer ever." |
Miscellaneous: | 8.75 | Av'd |
Final Score: | 43.75 | Good work, VFH worthy. Doesn't need any of the text changed but possibly, IMO, some funnier pictures/captions. Right now it is still great work. |
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