Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Regularer K
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Regular K[edit source]
So I added more to the end another picture and such and by God I think this is actually done can you believe it?
18:49, July 9, 2010 (UTC)
PEE REVIEW IN PROGRESS of giving you his opinion and pretending you care. |
Humour: | 8 | So, I read this, I liked it, I considered nomming it, and then I saw some things I thought could be tweaked and I decided to Pee Review it instead.
I like this article. I think it's probably feature-worthy right now. So I'm just going to talk about my concerns here: if I don't mention something, assume I like it.
That's it for my humor suggestions. Kind of a short list. |
Concept: | 10 | Good concept. |
Prose and formatting: | 7 | Same thing: if I don't mention it, it's fine.
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Images: | 10 | Nice shops. I like them. The picture of Mikey is appropriate. I will say, though, that I agree with the other review: it's kind of odd that the cereal is colored and the rest of the box is grey. I think it might be better just to grayscale the picture entirely. But, the way it is doesn't bug me. |
Miscellaneous: | 10 | Ready for prime time. |
Final Score: | 45 | I'd nom this if I were you: I'd vote for it even without my suggestions, and I suspect the vast majority of Uncyclopedians, would, as well. (Although I think making some of the changes I suggested would make it even better). Cheers!
Oh, and PEEING people: sorry this review isn't my most in-depth ever, but there's often not much to say about an article that's basically good to go. |
Reviewer: | 20:40, July 12, 2010 (UTC) |
I'm keeping the nutrition thing, as switching it around destroys the punchline effect, and also Jimmy the Irishman, as Lucky is such a fancy name. But other than that, thanks! --
02:10, July 13, 2010 (UTC)