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UnNews:Slow News Day angers activists[edit source]
This article is completely unrelated to, but partially inspired by, Starnestommy's article. Review appropriately, keep in mind the ironic undertones. --
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02:30, 6 June 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | Well written. It seems like every so often, a news anchor really can be replaced with a mentally challenged person. Also enjoyed Asperger's Syndrome reference |
| Concept: | 9 | A new take on the explanation for a slow news day. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | A few times had to go back and reread a sentence or two or three or four. Needs to be cleaned up. ALso, the activists are never really mentioned other than your title. |
| Images: | 9 | Good picture of Bill O' Reilly. Makes him seem pretty slow... |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | The reference to people like Larry David and the comment by Roger Ailes really add to the article |
| Final Score: | 40 | Pretty well done. The grammar could be fixed up, and maybe change a few jokes, but overall a good read. |
| Reviewer: | --RBnumber 15:36, 12 June 2007 (UTC) | |