UnNews talk:Pretzel assassin caught on White House lawn

From Pee Review

UnNews:Pretzel Assassin Caught on White House Lawn

I'm putting this up again because I truly believe the person who reviewed it first did not know that President Bush choked on a pretzel. So here it goes. My first in the saga. --Hell0ihateyou 19:13, 20 May 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	7.5	This is a good idea. The guy who reviewed you before had no clue what he was talking about.
Concept:	10	I would of never thought of this, very original
Prose and formatting:	9	flowed nicely
Images:	10	Perfect....hilarious
Miscellaneous:	5	add more humor, plus make it a tad longer
Final Score:	41.5	Thanks for reviewing my article
Reviewer:	Spatz 23:41, 20 May 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	6	Eh. This might have been funnier 5 years ago. Now it just feels dated.
Concept:	4	I easily could have thought of this, and my guess is that several other people already have.
Prose and formatting:	7	Despite its one-joke premise, it manages to be a smoothly written article. Good use of links.
Images:	6	The lone image is mildly funny but not very high quality.
Miscellaneous:	4	I am well aware that Bush choked on a pretzel, but the fact is that it happened so long ago that this article makes it seem like you've been in a coma for half a decade. It's just not fresh at all.
Final Score:	27	It's not as good as you think it is.
Reviewer:	-- » Sir Savethemooses Grand Commanding Officer ... holla atcha boy» 16:23, 21 May 2007 (UTC)

It's short, but I'm going to write several more articles related to this topic. Enjoy. --Hell0ihateyou 23:23, 19 May 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	1	Sorry
Concept:	5	Errr
Prose and formatting:	10	Excellent flow
Images:	5	Image not funny
Miscellaneous:	2	Purely Random
Final Score:	23	Not really feature material
Reviewer:	— H. Peebles - D - HS 23:38, 19 May 2007 (UTC)

Do you live in America? Are you not aware that Bush choked on a pretzel? --Hell0ihateyou 02:25, 20 May 2007 (UTC)

For the record, that happened a really long time ago. This article is extremely overdue, to say the least. -- T​K​F​​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​UU​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​CK 03:18, 20 May 2007 (UTC)

Yes, but the whole point is that the pretzel returned to assassinate him again. duh. --69.112.193.36 22:01, 20 May 2007 (UTC)

I thought this article was amusing Spatz 23:59, 20 May 2007 (UTC)