UnNews talk:Edit War Causes Massacre

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Another UnNews on my 'insignificance' theme. Leatherboundbooks^TalkContributions 19:39, 5 May 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	7	I wouldn't deem it fall-out-of-chair funny, but I was smiling all the way through. I'm not a fan of purposely slow pieces, so I disliked the intro a bit, but that's just one of my peeves. Same goes for the footnotes, though the middle and end effectively cancel it out.
Concept:	9	I didn't grasp the whole concept at first, and thought it to be more shallow, but as I read it became more obvious to me. A stroke of genius.
Prose and formatting:	5	Very nicely written, though I was annoyed that the usernames were just abbreviated versions of the names as opposed to more inventive pseudonyms. I guess that's just a pet peeve, though. BUT, I thought the formatting was at fault, and is the major downside holding this article back. The sources being combined with the article didn't seem comfortable with the rest of the article, but when I tried to put it in its own section it just looked more alien. I blame the giant template at the bottom, and perhaps a different one would be more suitable.
Images:	7	Appropriate images. Nothing too spectacular, but they grabbed my attention and that's all that really matters.
Miscellaneous:	10	Miscellany was present
Final Score:	38	Nicely done article, though the formatting at the end needs improvement.
Reviewer:	-- T​K​F​​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​UU​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​CK 02:21, 8 May 2007 (UTC)