Uncyclopedia:VFH/I wrote this article while drunk

Article: I wrote this article while drunk	Score: 1 devolving drunk people
Nominated by:	~ shifty eyes (talk) (stalk) -- 20100929 - 16:19 (UTC)
For: 7.5	N&F - Because the experiment was a success! ~ shifty eyes (talk) (stalk) -- 20100929 - 16:19 (UTC) For. I voted while arse-holed. --I'mthedaddy 19:03, September 29, 2010 (UTC) For. nice gradient( of stupidity) Poiz, look in my info? 19:21, September 29, 2010 (UTC) I would kill everyone in this room for a drop of sweet beer.User:Mrthejazz/sig 01:52, September 30, 2010 (UTC) For. 146.201.155.33 20:16, October 1, 2010 (UTC) For. Meh. (CUN) 06:06, October 2, 2010 (UTC) For. 92.7.170.103 06:23, October 2, 2010 (UTC) For. Coool 92.7.170.103 06:25, October 2, 2010 (UTC) For. YAY 92.7.170.103 06:26, October 2, 2010 (UTC) For. Whoa! I'm on drugs 92.7.170.103 06:27, October 2, 2010 (UTC)
Against: 6.5	Against. Looks more ?pedia than the kind of thing I like here.--Sycamore (Talk) 07:01, September 30, 2010 (UTC) Against. It's ok but don't see it as a feature. *RomArtusImperator ® (Orate) 08:04, September 30, 2010 (UTC) Ditto... -- Sir Mhaille (talk to me) Against. I wrote this vote while stoned. -- The Zombiebaron 09:13, September 30, 2010 (UTC) Sloncher I agree with Al on this one. The author needs to hold his liquor a little better. --—John Lydon 16:27, September 30, 2010 (UTC) Not really a fan. Sorry. --Black Flamingo 07:55, October 1, 2010 (UTC) Against**. 69.171.176.73 09:46, October 1, 2010 (UTC)
Comments	Honestly folks, I'll be really surprised if this gets featured. Let's just say this: I didn't point the gun, I just pulled the trigger, so it's not my fault. User:Mrthejazz/sig 11:50, September 30, 2010 (UTC) I liked some of the lines and the pics, but the problem I have with it is you make the narrator get drunk too quickly. It's a short page, and it just seems like he loses everything by the third sip or something. Maybe a much longer piece where the first third or so is written sober, then downhill, then roaring out of control drunk. But like you said, you didn't put this up for VFH, some random drunk did. Red Aleister 12:22 30 9 Yes, the "narrator" got drunk too quick. Hehehe.User:Mrthejazz/sig 02:48, October 1, 2010 (UTC)