Uncyclopedia:VFH/Anti-Ugly Pill (Second Try)

Article: Anti-Ugly Pill	Score: 0 non uglies
Nominated by:	Director WILLYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 16:46, March 23, 2010 (UTC)
For: 2	Nom&For Reworked this thing since its last review. Much better now--Director WILLYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 16:47, March 23, 2010 (UTC) For You know what? It made me laugh. Over and over. The spelling, grammar, tenses, etc. etc. are horrible, but here, this once, it works for me. I may be insulting Iwillkillou, and then he will kill me, but the mistakes, on purpose or not, quaint this up so much that yes, I laughed, over and over. What more can you ask for? Yay. Aleister in Chains 1:17 24 3 mmx
Against: 2	Against. ChildEatingTeddyBear 14:38, March 25, 2010 (UTC) ChildEatingTeddyBear 14:38, March 25, 2010 (UTC) Meh. Megaman126512 21:13, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
Comments	Abstain. I saw this on pee review, and after I'm done with the review I'm currently working on, I'd be happy to review this for you. The reason I'm abstaining is that I think you need that second review, I read the introduction of this article and there are numerous grammar errors that give it an unprofessional feel. Like I said, I'd be happy to review it for you in a day or two. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 13:23 EST 23 Mar, 2010 Abstain. Needs a firm copy-edit. If someone would do that (not me, obviously), I'd gladly vote For. • • • Necropaxx (T) {~} Wednesday, 01:47, Mar 24 2010 It's a good article but it needs a bit more work to make it featurable. The quality of the Ugly Betty image could be improved, for instance. —Sir Socky (talk) (stalk) GUN SotM UotM PMotM UotY PotM WotM 13:55, 27 March 2010