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I brought back the Chicago (music) page back up again. But it needs to be worked on some more. Any ideas? – Preceding unsigned comment added by MrCleveland (talk • contribs)

UN:PEE. But since you're attempting a band page, read up on HTBFANJS, and make sure you've got some funny ideas, beacause pages about bands are probably the hardest things you can try to make funny. You may even wanna check out this.‎ - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon (Tick Tock) (Contribs) 04:26, Feb 14

First thing, Please sign your posts with ~~~~. Second, that little list at the bottom consisting of Chicago, Chicago 2, Chicago 3 (ect) is not funny, and should be removed. Third, read HTBFANJS for some help on funny, and maybe look around at some other articles to get a sence of what is funny. After you feel that it is sufficiently longer and funnier, create a Pee Review for the page to get a second opinion on it.

As for content, I got nothing. Lieutenant THEDUDEMAN Dude ... Totally UOTM KUN GotA F@H 04:28, 14 February 2008 (UTC)

HowTo:Write A Funny Band Article tells you much of what you need to know... --SirU.U.Esq. VFH | GUN | Natter | Uh oh | Pee 04:19, 14 February 2008 (EST)

In lieu of that, won't you please come to Chicago just to sing? We can change the world, you know--rearrange it, even. - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon (Tick Tock) (Contribs) 11:28, Feb 14

... and then he ran into my knife. He ran into my knife 10 times. Oh... I'm sorry, I was talking about something else. Please continue with your regular conversation... /me slinks off.--<<>> 13:13, 14 February 2008 (UTC)

Shouldn't it be Chicago (band)? --THINKER 15:04, 14 February 2008 (UTC)

Nah. They got their own genre down there. Captain Can you read that? Feel the love. 23:10, 14 February 2008 (UTC)

• Though your brother's bound and gagged/And they've chained him to a chair/Won't you please come to Chicago/Just to sing -- The Zombiebaron 23:19, 14 February 2008 (UTC)

• IMHO the cadence seems a little off and it kind of reads like a second grader's oral book report. It is choppy. It is stilted. I'd get rid of the joliet prison stuff too. Also, it would be really good if it was rewritten. No offense. --75.136.133.143 14:33, 15 February 2008 (EST)