| Article: Gavrilo Princip
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Score: -1
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| Nominated by:
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Cheesierboy 22:15, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
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For: 1
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- For Good article and funny aswell--Cheesierboy 22:15, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
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Against: 2
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- Against. I'm sorry, but I feel it needs basic work. "Because of these diseases, it may have added to his willingness..." is ungrammatical; "Mainly due to the teenage girls..." is a fragment. ----OEJ 00:43, 2 August 2007 (UTC)
- Not ready for prime-time. EugeneKay wuz here (whine thank) 06:16, 3 August 2007 (UTC)
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| Comments
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- Abs. Granted it could use a good tuning, but I actually found a good amount of humor in here. I think someone with the aptitude for more flowing prose should give this a once-over; after tweaking, I think I'd vote for this one. --THINKER 04:15, 2 August 2007 (UTC)
- Abs Yeah, needs work, but it's got a good premise. I might butcher and reput-together the prose when the nom is done, but it could use some more funny. Still I'd like to see this featured in the future, for reasons I really don't know myself. -RAHB 05:01, 2 August 2007 (UTC)
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- Abs. Agree the premise is good, and with work I'd be happy to vote for it. Not happy enough to do the work though. Why break the habit of... a month or so? --Under user 11:02, 3 August 2007 (UTC)
