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A Peter Griffin Christmas

Something stupid I wrote my first year at Uncyclopedia. It was unanimously deleted before Christmas even arrived. Five years later, I've resurrected, tweaked and expanded it to something slightly less stupid. -- Kippy the Elf Talk Works ☃ 19:13, Nov. 17, 2012

I think it's fun and light. The issue is that I don't think there is much we can do with comedy shows except a) rip them to pieces or b) pretend they are about real person. When I read the South Park article I thought it would be a lot funnier to write a geographical article, as if South Park were a real town in Colorado, than to write a half-serious bio of the show, so I think your approach makes sense. I'd expand the reception section - I don't like the way the quote looks there, and I think we need to think of a smarter ending.

Below is my review. Please don't think this as rock-solid, this is my first. -- Me, You, You, talk to me >^.^< 00:50, 1 July 2013 (UTC)

Humour:	6.3	Pretty funny, I'd say. Though, Peter Griffin is funny in itself, the article adds backstory.
Concept:	4.9	Not much you can do here. Also, I would try to explain every song in there (Most people have only heard of "Ding, Fries are Done.") or ask for help.
Prose and formatting:	6	Easy to read, but a bit of a stub.
Images:	7.6	You did a good job here. Love the GIF.
Miscellaneous:	6.3	Worked out avg. in my head, punk. (IDK)
Final Score:	31.1	Not too bad for a rewrite of a deleted article.
Reviewer:	-- Me, You, You, talk to me >^.^< 00:45, 1 July 2013 (UTC)