Talk:Jediism

Anon IP, if you make an account then what you do here can be reflected on a user page. --RomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate) 10:35, August 13, 2012 (UTC)

I think anon already has ~Sir Frosty (Talk to me!) 10:39, August 13, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I have, but I keep forgetting that I need to log in each time I close my browser. JediGanesh (talk) 10:41, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Redlinks

I've created redlinks to items that SHOULD NOT exist. And in fact, it's funnier if they don't. But if this causes problems, please feel free to tell me what problems this causes. JediGanesh (talk) 17:01, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Rewrite

I strongly suggest we rewrite this article.

I've been working on my own personal rewrite, which can be found here: User:Qzekrom/Jediism. I've even included a little things from this currently existing one, like the holidays, and I'm not opposed to using some more already existing content within it. ~ QZEKЯOM Proud sponsor of Team Zombiebaron Tw$*ty Tw%#ve G*me$ FTW! Let's go for the g^@d! 15:19, August 26, 2012 (UTC)

Pee Review

JediGanesh (talk) 17:18, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

If I decided to write an article about Star Wars in any form, I would spend some time just thinking passively to see if an angle pops up. The problem is that the whole subject has been milked dry several times over. Is it possible to write anything surprising about the subject at all? The second problem I would face is writing about an imaginary thing in a different kind of imaginary world in general. That often spells boredom for the casual reader. The angle should then be something that looks as if it is from the real world, like in this one for instance. Tolkien also has been milked dry several times over, yet I think I managed to find something new through the angle thing. Note that we kept the article short: each idea came voluntarily and from within Tolkien's world, more or less, while the commentator ostensibly stayed in ours. And of course, it being me, anal sex was the only way to go. How the fuck are we to treat modern classics if we'll not act like 12-year-olds? Also, I had a lot of help from Mhaille and another friend who's not here on Uncyc. That's why it came out pretty OK. -- Style  Guide 05:40, 18 March 2013 (UTC)

Humour:	3.5	There is some good humor lurking in here. Over 9000 is a bad joke. I mean, it can be funny at times. However, rarely. I'd cut them if I were you. Maybe I'd bump this up to a 5 or 6ish. Other than that, it needs more funny and not just a majority of slapstick.
Concept:	7	Pretty easily detected. It's a "faith". lol
Prose and formatting:	6	The prose and format stuff was okay. Not much to comment on. Nice location of the Slave Leia.
Images:	8	Slave Leia, Kermit and Yoda, etc. Funny. Good job. And "Fishing For Jedi Jesus" was a good one.
Miscellaneous:	6.1	Averaged other scores
Final Score:	30.6	A little over the average mainspace article, not a FA IMHO. Could do well on VFH, probably won't pass though...
Reviewer:	Sir Peasewhizz Biblio HOS Awards 17:17 3.23.13