Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Hack your iPhone
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Any requests on how to make it better are greatly apreciated.--Lieutenant THEDUDEMAN Dude ... Totally UOTM KUN GotA F@H 05:50, 2 January 2008 (UTC)
HowTo:Hack your iPhone[edit source]
| Humour: | 7.3 | It's not really that laugh out loud yet. I liked the "You're an idiot" jokes. They should be more exaggerated. You could over-emphasize how much the reader is an moron. |
| Concept: | 9 | It's a simple idea, but it will work if you do it right. Also, this article might be pretty helpful in real life. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7.8 | It's not too bad right now. It needs some expansion. You could add more "alternative methods", and maybe expand the existing ones right now a tiny bit. Oh yeah, it nees some proof-reading, since I saw some minor mistakes. |
| Images: | 7 | The first image was a average since it was a real iPhone, but a funny caption would calling you an "idiot" again would make it work. I think you really need an image of a guy holding an iPhone with a dumb expression on his face, like he doesn't know what to do with it. I didn't really like the BSOD image, but that's me. A Satanic iPhone might be funnier. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7.5 | I can't think of anything else to add, so I just averaged it out and subtracted half a point. |
| Final Score: | 38.6 | -- Kip the Egg  Talk Works 06:48, Jan. 2, 2008
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| Reviewer: | Kip the Dip | |