Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Jimbo Wales doesn't believe in Santa Claus
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UnNews:Jimbo Wales doesn't believe in Santa Claus[edit source]
My Christmas-themed article for the year. I've been working on it for months, and it's already been peed on twice. I just need some last minute tips. Is it lacking anywhere? Can it be made funnier or more satiricle? Should I remove one of the images? Et cedera. -- Kip the Egg 
Talk Works 10:02, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | This is a very interesting article, as well as the fact that it is well written article. It's pretty funny, but sadly, I didn't LOL. |
| Concept: | 7 | Very interesting concept. No complaints, in other words, good |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | I loved the girl messaging Jimbo Wales with her poor spelling/grammar. Also, nice use of templates such as {{cquote}}. It seems well formatted to me, though keep in mind, I don't teach grammar. |
| Images: | 9 | I loved the chops, all thanks to our friend Under user. I think the images don't need to be removed, unless you wan't them to be removed, but if I were to choose, I would remove the second on. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7.5 | avg'd via {{Pee}} |
| Final Score: | 37.5 | In all, good article. It appears that you put a great deal of work into this article. Work on the satire a bit more, and this might hit the front page (though I doubt it). |
| Reviewer: | -- 15:06, 16 December 2007 (UTC) | |