Talk:12 year old girl theory

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Reads more like a HowTo: than a regular article. I will look at this closely later, but I have a headache right now. --Danny Himself 13:12, 4 January 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	6	You have a sense of humor. Congratulations, as many here do not (I know- what is up with that?). The humor here is a little clichéd, though, and I think you should work on that. I'd advice reading articles by Savethemooses for some pointers on how to bring out your humor potential.
Concept:	4	The concept is imaginitive but in that sense it has been your downfall. If everything did have to appeal to 12 year olds no matter what, this article would be awesome, but alas, 12 year old girls don't rule the earth. Yet.
Prose and formatting:	6	The whole article is written like some bastard child of a HowTo: article and and an UnBook. This is not very good. You need the article to read like an article. You have formatted the page pretty well, but there's still a lot of uncapitalized capital letters and such hanging around. If something is to be emphasized, don't capitalize it- put it in italics.
Images:	2	Face it, the images aren't particularly good. The unicorn picture is way too small, and the American Worldview picture is pretty much unrelated.
Miscellaneous:	0	The article kinda trails off halfway through and becomes an article about emo types. Naughty, naughty. Keep your eyes on the prize.
Final Score:	18	You have potential to become a good writer here. Something.. just something, is holding you back. I suggest you do a bit of reading (featured articles, mainly) and eventually the idea will come, and words will blossom from your keyboard like beautiful rhodedendrons.
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Yes, I agree, this article would be better in a HowTo: format.. maybe HowTo:A famous entertainer? I don't know. —Braydie at 16:54, 5 January 2007 (UTC)

OMFGSZZZ XD LAWL WTF. Man in the Ceiling 23:31, 26 March 2007 (UTC)

Agree with your article =] and i think that 12 year old girls pretty much do rule the world

AN ACTUAL 12 YEAR OLD GIRL'S POINT OF VIEW ............................................................................................................................. i, bein a 12 yr old girl, agree with only a few parts, i think too many 12 yr olds r too obsessed with miley cyrus an the bros of jonas or watever theyre supposed to be called so must people sum it up that all 12 yr ol girls lik mylee cyrus an think theyre gonna marry sumone from bros of jonas.... but unlik so many stupidly cunfuzed girls, me an all my frens, hate all the stuff, cudnt care less bout them, an were into bands like the red jumsuit apparatus, panic! at the disco, avenged sevenfold, disturbed, m.c.r (my chemical romance), santana ,puddle of mud, creed, zz top, the eagles, kid rock, foo fighters, flyleaf, red, six am, system of a down, and so much more bands that haf of my guy frens havnt even herd of, so if u want the freggin weird-freakky-stupid-retarded-cunfuzed- girls, then plz lisen an follow it, but if u want a realistic girl, who dont car a thin bout bros of jonas, mylee cirus, or tha STUPID musical in hi skool crap, then ACT URSELF!!!!!!!!(we actual girls do hav different kinds u kno, theres more than jus one type!!!!)

Thank you so much for your opinion. Now please, go back to class. You still haven't learned to type correctly. Also, SPELL CHECK! It's a great tool and almost every computer has the capability to due it. Most do it automatically, in fact... Anyway, this is a comedic site. This is poking fun at the average 12 year old girl. We don't care about your opinion, to be honest. Well, I don't. And you too have a horrible taste in music (Disturbed, System of a Down, ZZ Top, Kid Rock, The Eagles, and Santana are the only good/decent musicians you listed). Don't try to act high and mighty just because you don't like Disney crap. You still like that deploring emo crap. --MegaPleb • Dexter111344 • Complain here 02:43, 3 September 2008 (UTC)

I'm also a 12 year old girl!!! wait, no. I'm 13. But I turned 13 a few months ago. Anyways, I hate HSM and Justin Bieber and the Jonas brothers and all of the disgusting muggle crap. My favorite bands are MCR, Brand New, Death Cab For Cutie, Coldplay, Lydia, Portugal. The Man, Copeland, and so on.... :P It is quite insulting when someone assumes you listen to shit like justin bieber. She isn't acting high and mighty, she's just saying not all 12 year old girls listen to pop shit. -_- You do need to learn to spell correctly. An average 12 year old girl isn't JB or HSM or jonas brother or twilight obsessed.

12 year old genius

I am a genius. Disregard that. I suck cocks. Will yu suck my cock

One year off being a Polanski joke.

Bummer.

Uh...Hi.

Okay, I am a 12 year old girl, I swear to you I am. I found this page funny, actually. You might want to know that Good Charlotte and the Backstreet Boys aren't popular to people in my grade, BTW. This page happens to make fun of everything I hate, well...except Fall out Boy. I kind of like them. I like stuff like Green Day, blink-182, All Time Low, Panic! At The Disco, etc. Not the Miley Cyrus crap. So, I'm just saying that not all 12-year old girls like the Jonas Brothers. I still found this article hilarious. Thank you. (and yes, I did edit this, because I was going to edit it before but it wouldn't work) Jerseygirl182x 00:36, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Making generalisations is a tool of humour, but I apologise that we assume you like Backstreet Boys. --nldr 00:27, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Not a problem (you edited out your response or something). End your messages with the four tildes btw (this: ~~~~) --nldr 00:33, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Also, also: you can respond wholeheartedly simply by placing your retort under the latest comment, rather than edit a pre-existing statement. :) --nldr 00:39, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Right, sorry. :) --Jerseygirl182x 00:44, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Apology accepted. I notice your talk page hasn't received an automated welcome notice, so I'll go cough up an un-automated one. Expect a new message momentarily. --nldr 00:45, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks!--Jerseygirl182x 01:40, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Hey! I found this... and well you people are just sick. Really why would you waste your time making something like this? Every woman you know was once twelve-years-old. Yes, I am twelve and I do enjoy listening to One Direction... but Miley Cyrus is what, twenty-one now? She hasn't done anything in a while that would make anyone like her...

Just to all of you no life losers out there, stop discriminating twelve-year-old girls. By doing this is not going to make your life any better. – Preceding unsigned comment added by 96.242.122.176 (talk • contribs)

Yes, I was once a twelve year old girl. That was in the late 70s early 80s, and I watched Lawrence Welk with my parents on weekends, because my mom didn't like Solid Gold Dancers. You should know by now that this site is largely about stereotypes: check out the articles on religion if you doubt me. Lurk a bit more, if your parents will let you, and you will find your perception changed. We mock, but we don't discriminate who we mock. If you like, you can write an article on unemployed 30-somethings and 40-somethings. Or just read the article on Unemployment for more stereotypes on the unemployed. Or if you prefer, try Fraternity or Sorority those are fair game, too (for those still in college who might be in fraternities or sororities). Its easier to criticize than it is to write a decent article. And whatever you do, DO read HTBFANJS before writing your first article. Then after you've read it, come back and criticize it in terms of comedic writing value. Twelve year old girls can be funny. Funny is what we are looking for here. -- Simsilikesims(♀UN) Talk here. 22:40, May 9, 2012 (UTC)