Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Nuclear Holocaust
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Nuclear Holocaust[edit source]
If this can be done fairly quickly, I'd be appreciative. I want to redirect the old article, which is crappy (as long as this one isn't also), and count it as a CW rewrite. Thanks.
GlobalTourniquet: UnAstrologer, UnJournalist, shameless narcissistic America-hating liberal atheist award-winning featured writer 02:37, November 3, 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | Meaning, maybe 60-70% there |
| Concept: | 9 | Needs some tweaking, but yeah your there almost |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | See misc. comments below |
| Images: | 8 | See misc. comments below |
| Miscellaneous: | 1 | First example, instead of the public killing them, have it be a coal and/or peat moss burning plant. Second, ya can't leave out Chernobyl...maybe it gets assassinated by the KGB, Greenpeace, or whoever, then it fights back and radiates people...yadda yadda, you get what I mean... |
| Final Score: | 32 | Overall looks great, don't remove anything, and maybe demonize Greenpeace, instead of the 'fearful public'. |
| Reviewer: | — H. Peebles - D - HS    14:54, November 3, 2009 (UTC)
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