Talk:Michael Scott
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Quotes[edit source]
I'm starting to see a lot of Michael Scott quotes like this:
“That's what she said.”
While it's funny in certain contexts, I'm afraid it's going to be overused, like Oscar Wilde, Captain Obvious, or Russian Reversal. Could you please use the quotes sparrangly. -- Kippy the Elf Talk Works ☃
From Pee[edit source]
Humour: | 4 | Too much randomness and name dropping to be humourous. Sorry =/ |
Concept: | 4 | Its pretty hard to pull off a good biography page and altogether too easy to make a bad one. |
Prose and formatting: | 5 | Prose isn't this articles strong point to be sure, but its not its weakest point either. |
Images: | 6 | The images are just marginally better than MSPaint cut and pastes. At least theres not too much horrible white halo around the chops. Why is he karate chopping an apocolypse? I have no idea. |
Miscellaneous: | 3 | Spelling mistakes, lists and really just not funny. |
Final Score: | 22 | Overall this article could use a lot of work, as it is, I would say its teetering precariously near the brink of VFD. Biography pages of well-known people are notoriously hard to make hilarious, so its hard to suggest how to improve this. Think about intelligent humour rather than just namedropping lots of other famous people. Sorry if this sounds harsh but this needs some work =/ |
Reviewer: | ~ Dame Ceridwyn ~ talk DUN VoNSE arc2.0 06:01, 31 May 2007 |
From TheOtherOne[edit source]
Too ADD to read the article but the picture of Micheal Scot should be used in an episode.