User:Cajek/Archive36

• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:Guildensternenstein/UnNews:Madden 12 to feature new Lockout Mode (revised) by JackOfSpades. Aye. --ChiefjusticeXBox 00:24, April 1, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Why?:Why? by Why? No. While I'm sure you enjoyed doing that, but we can't really call it a review. Would be nice to see you back to your old reviewing ways sometime. --ChiefjusticeXBox 00:20, April 1, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/There's a black hole in my coffee by Magic man. Yeah, that's ok. --ChiefjusticeXBox 00:14, April 1, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UserBhind45/Malcolm in the Middle by Frosty. No. Just not enough there. --ChiefjusticeXBox 00:10, April 1, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/ Last of the Mohicans by Lockdandload. Good enough for a first review. --ChiefjusticeXBox 00:06, April 1, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Peekaboo by JelloMold. Nope, see here. --ChiefjusticeXBox 21:20, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:Egalitarian Aspie/UnNews:Charlie Sheen discovers new element(quick) by Oliphaunte. I am very impressed by your reviews, you are thoughtful and you provide good suggestions for improvement. All I suggest is that you try to be a little more encouraging when giving the lower scores, remember that your review can often mean a writer persevering in their work or leaving altogether, try and score generously and encourage newer writers. Good work generally though. --ChiefjusticeXBox 20:50, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:Bhind45/Malcolm in the Middle by Oliphaunte. Yes, see above for my comments. --ChiefjusticeXBox 20:50, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Pelican by Egalitarian Aspie. Nope, take a look at this if you want some pointers. --ChiefjusticeXBox 21:03, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Jamiroquai by Lyrithya. Yeah, they are all fine, your style is different to what I see as ideal, but it gets the job done which is the important thing. --ChiefjusticeXBox 20:40, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Infinite Jest by Black flamingo11. Excellent, save for one thing. 'Wiki' is not an appropriate abbreviation for 'Wikipedia'; this is a wiki too, as is ?pedia. You didn't read a ?pedia article on Infinite Jest, did you? 1234 ~ 05:17, 26 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/What you didn't know about Mario & Luigi by Shabidoo. Okay. 1234 ~ 11:07, 25 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnPoetica:Black Sabbath (revised) by Shabidoo. Yes, although it would be nice if you'd consider the form and functions of each of your sentences as you write. 1234 ~ 11:07, 25 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Bad Nigga Attitude by Mysterynonymous. Mmm, good especially for a first, and the follow-up solidifies matters. Warg! 1234 ~ 11:35, 25 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Category:Filial Piety Nominations by Shabidoo. I'm not really sure why you reviewed a category, but that's really not an in-depth review of the thing itself, either. Whatever 'in-depth' would even be for such a thing. 1234 ~ 11:07, 25 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Be a Troll by JackOfSpades. Aye. 1234 ~ 10:47, 25 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Mars by Shabidoo. Yes, but you mixed up the prose/images sections. 1234 ~ 11:07, 25 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Radiation hits California, causes super-heroes by Oliphaunte. Sure. 1234 ~ 10:47, 25 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnPoetia:Black Sabbath by Lyrithya. Yup. --ChiefjusticeXBox 20:40, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:BobNewbie/UnNews:The 85th Anal Film Awards Rocks The Night! by Oliphaunte. Seems borderlinish, but aye. 1234 ~ 05:37, 21 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:Magic man/UnNews:Old people more likely to die, study shows by JackOfSpades. Greeny aye. Oh, and you get a urinal! YAAAY! Well, if I remember, anyway. 1234 ~ 04:13, 21 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/On the Run Chatroom by BobNewbie. Sure. 1234 ~ 04:27, 21 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Chauchat by Lyrithya. Yes. --ChiefjusticeXBox 20:40, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Psychedelic music by Black flamingo11. Aye. 1234 ~ 03:57, 21 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:I sneezed (revised) by BobNewbie. Good for a first and for an UnNews. 1234 ~ 04:27, 21 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Bilton Mabbitt by GEORGIEGIBBONS. No, even for a first, it'd need more. 1234 ~ 04:27, 21 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/People Who Like to Fuck Naked (twice) by Black flamingo eleven. Progress! 1234 ~ 03:57, 21 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnScripts:Superman's first adventure by Jaques du Spades. Ayup. 1234 ~ 04:13, 21 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Bear In The Big Blue House by Lyrithya. Yes. --ChiefjusticeXBox 20:40, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:BobNewbie/UnTunes:Bad Burrito (Feat. Nicki Minaj) by Mr Kate Bush. Yes, happy groom, that will suffice. 1234 ~ 03:57, 21 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Viking Metal by Shab. Yes, but please please please proofread your reviews. There are a lot of spelling/grammar issues here. --Black Flamingo 02:45, March 19, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Why?:College is for suckers! (revised again) by JackOfSpades. Consider this the explanation for the oddity I left on your talkpage. 1234 ~ 07:42, 17 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/YBox by Oliphaunte. Go on, then. 1234 ~ 02:50, 17 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Why?:College is for suckers! (revised) by Shabidoo. That works, though I can't necessarily say I agree with all your points. 1234 ~ 19:14, 16 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Milton Babbitt/rewrite by Shabidoo. Reckon so, though if they're one article, and if you're going to talk about them as one article, it might make more sense to do it as one review. 1234 ~ 19:14, 16 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Talk:Milton Babbitt by Shabidoo. Rather borderline, but it mentions enough to suffice. 1234 ~ 19:14, 16 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Robot Chicken (revised) by JackOfSpades. List aren't invariably bad. People just rarely do them right. Also, yes. 1234 ~ 19:00, 16 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:Guildensternenstein/UnNews:Madden 12 to feature new Lockout Mode by Oliphaunte. Okay. 1234 ~ 19:00, 16 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:GEORGIEGIBBONS/ODSTSuperSpartan by Black flamingo. Mmm, and a review from someone with more class should do him good. *shifty eyes* 1234 ~ 05:39, 14 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Why?:College is for suckers! by Lyrithya. Yes. --ChiefjusticeXBox 20:40, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Symphony in Z Minor (2) by Oliphaunte. You have sacreficed your brain for the greater good. 1234 ~ 22:05, 12 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Robot Chicken by Black flamingo11. You treat the noobs well. Also, aye. 1234 ~ 21:52, 12 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Why?:My homework was late by Black flamingo11. Not even close. 1234 ~ 21:52, 12 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Game:Zerg Rush by Lyrithya. Yes. --ChiefjusticeXBox 20:40, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Milton Babbitt by Shabidoo. It's a difficult article, but I'ma have to say no, as if you don't know what's going on and don't any research - look up the subject, read the talkpage, ect, how can you really suggest what to do to make it more clear, let alone speak to how effective any of it is? 1234 ~ 21:32, 12 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Stupid Cats by Chief. Self-yes. --ChiefjusticeXBox 17:06, March 11, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Preggobear by JackOfSpades. Mais oui. --ChiefjusticeXBox 17:00, March 11, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Warner Music Group by JackOfSpades. Ja. --ChiefjusticeXBox 17:00, March 11, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/A pizza a day keeps the doctor away by Flamingo. Not one of me best, but enough. --Black Flamingo 21:44, March 10, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Nazi Zombies by Chief. I hope so. --ChiefjusticeXBox 13:17, March 10, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/A Series of Unfortunate Events by Oliphaunte. Sure, why not. 1234 ~ 04:57, 10 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Okami by JackOfSpades. Indeed, although if you want to talk about prose or whatever first, you can change the order of your reviews bymmph! Urgh let go of agmmph... – Preceding unsigned comment added by Lyrithya (talk • contribs)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/That kid at the mall by Oliphaunte. You're nice. I mean aye. 1234 ~ 04:57, 10 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Justin Bieber by Scofield. Aye. 1234 ~ 03:35, 10 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Rock and Roll Hall of Fame by Oliphaunte. I forgot what I was going to say, but... er... yes? 1234 ~ 04:57, 10 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Kim Kardashian and George Lucas reveal plans for new sitcom by TheHumbucker. Rather borderline yes... you mention good general stuff, but what about specifics? Could be better how? What were the mistakes? 1234 ~ 03:35, 10 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Ovum by JackOfSpades. Yes. --Black Flamingo 22:16, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:TheHumbucker/UnNews In Progress by JackOfSpades. Yes. --Black Flamingo 22:16, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/How to: Solve a problem with cannons by Oliphaunte. Yes. --Black Flamingo 22:16, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Skunk by JackOfSpades. Very borderline yes. I really think you could say more, especially in humour. There are also a lot more spelling/grammar problems than you discuss here. --Black Flamingo 22:16, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Lucyfer's Friend by TheHumbucker. Yes. --Black Flamingo 21:44, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/King Diamond by Cat the Colourful. No, read the guidelines.
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Study: Blueberries actually just peas holding their breath by JackOfSpades. Yes, although you only score an 8.5 for humour but don't give any advice on how to improve. Not a big deal but this can be frustrating for writers. --Black Flamingo 20:49, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Dexter by JackOfSpades. Yes. --Black Flamingo 20:49, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Hydrogen is Being Impersonated!! by Oliphaunte. Yes. --Black Flamingo 20:49, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Raymond Chandler's "Murder on the Orient Express" by JackOfSpades. For a Sog piece, that's enough. --Black Flamingo 20:49, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:JackOfSpades/WiP/Chemistry by Oliphaunte. It's good to know I'm not the only one who... does that. Also, sure. >.< 1234 ~ 02:47, 5 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Muddy Waters by JackOfSpades. Aye, but... ITS! 1234 ~ 02:42, 5 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Charlie Sheen wins Academy Award for Best Actor Meltdown by Hyperbole. *cough* Yes. 1234 ~ 02:45, 5 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/The Pogues by JackOfSpades. Yes. 1234 ~ 02:42, 5 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Giant, fanged hams by John Lydon. Oh, go on, then. 1234 ~ 19:24, 2 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:Gamma287/Grand Theft Auto: Cartoon City by JackOfSpades. Ayup, that's the stuff. 1234 ~ 19:06, 2 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Obama birth certificate non-existent; Hawaii Health Director quits by JackOfSpades. Wheee, news. I mean... yes. 1234 ~ 19:06, 2 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Be a Brave Protagonist (Revised) by JackOfSpades. Yup. 1234 ~ 19:06, 2 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Mobutu Sese Seko by Shabidoo. Aye, but it'd be better if you didn't contradict yourself... 1234 ~ 19:00, 2 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:Hyperbole/Swan song by Shabidoo. Borderline yes. 'Concept' just means the main idea, you know... 1234 ~ 19:00, 2 March 2011
• Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:Mnbvcxz/Preggobear by Shabidoo. Yeah, fine. 1234 ~ 19:00, 2 March 2011