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Why?:Is my molten steel bill so high?[edit source]
I think this one has some potential. Any ideas?
Cap'n Sir Ben GUN WotM VFH VFP 05:51, 4 January 2009 (UTC)
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I, Methamphetamine, am here to pee on your article. If you can, please let me pee. Thank you, and good night.
| Humour: | 7 | I found the one liners funny, the paranoid feeling of the story, and even how it parodies speeches about utility bills, but I can't find anything laugh out loud funny in the entire article. |
| Concept: | 9 | The actual concept is perfect. Molten steel is never used in everyday life, nobody is ever concerned about. You have a great execution, as you act like molten steel is a utility, not a liquid capable of melting everything it touches. No complaints here. |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | Ellipsis is only for a cutoff of a sentence (i.e.: ALIENS...NEPTUNE...EVERYONE'S DEAD!), so instead of using ellipsis, use a comma. Also, it's $168,000, but I'll fix that. |
| Images: | 6 | Two images, one of them sub-par. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7.8 | AVGIMISIEIDIDIDIDIDYOURFATHERANDMOTHERIDID |
| Final Score: | 38.8 | Class job, it just needs a little work, and it'll be good enough for a feature on the front page. |
| Reviewer: | Sire それは驚くばかりの性交である!! -4- (17:50 01-4-2009) | |