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Hi! I'm submitting this here before I submit it to VFH. I'd enjoy some suggestions for improvement and maybe some collaboration. ~[ths] UotM 23:38, 05/28/2012

Funny, imnho, but I would advise against making the poems obviously yours (by signing the first and last ones). -- Sir CuteLatiosOnTheRadio [CUN • PBJ'12 • PLS(0) • Stuy'16] 00:49, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

@Dan: I would review this article, but I don't really have the time. So for now I'll just say that I would like someone to review this article, and I'll also agree with what Qzek said, and I'd also say that it needs more cowbell (and more ponies) -- NotReallyMyUsername 2012-05-29T05:37

Add an AAAAAAA poem, plz. -- Sir CuteLatiosOnTheRadio [CUN • PBJ'12 • PLS(0) • Stuy'16] 19:46, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

I would review this, but since I got SATs coming up, not yet. |Si Plebius Dato' Joe ang Pinoy CUN|IC Kill | 10:59, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'll do this. ^{→ (Der_Führerbunker--Wehrmacht Factories)} 17:58, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Humour:	3	Could be funnier. Like a rickroll reference, for instance. Or a brony reference. (But I wouldn't think you'd do that)
Concept:	7.5	This is a great concept. However, trying to cram all of the Internet's stupidity and awesomeness into haiku, again, is a very hard task. Concept good, the way you exploited the concept, meh.
Prose and formatting:	10	It's Haiku, you can't fail at formatting Haiku.
Images:	0	NEEDS A SHOOP DA WOOP LAZER FIRING MEME IMAGE
Miscellaneous:	0	N/A
Final Score:	20.5	Needs more mainstream references, meme images, and overall remake of humor concept. Shoot for more pointed humor.
Reviewer:	→ (Der_Führerbunker--Wehrmacht Factories)

After the Pee

Have we added an All Your Base related haiku, or a HaikuAbout CamelCase? -- Sir CuteLatiosOnTheRadio [CUN • PBJ'12 • PLS(0) • Stuy'16] 21:51, June 6, 2012 (UTC)