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UnNews:Vladimir Putin is "so gay," says President Bush[edit source]
Created after getting the idea from... something. Opinions? 
Contestant CUN -- VFH NotM Buzz Ctrbs 22:33, 19 December 2007 (UTC)
- This is an unacceptable review. Please read the f'ing PEE REVIEW GUIDELINES.
• <-> (Dec 20 / 00:06)
- ¿Por qué? I've read the guidelines several times, I'm just trying to do my part and get some reviews in. Any chance you could let me know where I'm not getting it? ~Minitrue Sir SysRq! Talk! Sex! =/ GUN • WotM • RotM • AotM • VFH • SK • PEEING • HP • BFF 00:11, 20 December 2007 (UTC)
- What Cajek means is that you should try to write a little more into your reviews: instead of saying what was funny, say why it was funny, and how to make it even funnier if you can think of anything. Give specific examples and advice to help the writer; otherwise you're just giving them a score. A score is nice, but I like advice. It's cool as ice. For it, I'd pray any price. Etc. - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon
(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 00:16, Dec 20
- What Cajek means is that you should try to write a little more into your reviews: instead of saying what was funny, say why it was funny, and how to make it even funnier if you can think of anything. Give specific examples and advice to help the writer; otherwise you're just giving them a score. A score is nice, but I like advice. It's cool as ice. For it, I'd pray any price. Etc. - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon
- ¿Por qué? I've read the guidelines several times, I'm just trying to do my part and get some reviews in. Any chance you could let me know where I'm not getting it? ~Minitrue Sir SysRq! Talk! Sex! =/ GUN • WotM • RotM • AotM • VFH • SK • PEEING • HP • BFF 00:11, 20 December 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 9 | I thought it was funny. The jokes were consistent with your theme. I usually don't like this kind of immature humor but in this case it was very appropriate. I wouldn't change a thing. |
| Concept: | 9 | Very nice idea, I respect UnNews that isn't completely made up. Satire requires the sharpest of wits. |
| Prose and formatting: | 10 | Very well written. Your tone is spot on for this kind of joke. |
| Images: | 8 | Three images for an UnNews article is better than I usually see, and they all contribute to the article. Nice captions, nice images, very nice. |
| Miscellaneous: | 9 | Got nothing else for ya. |
| Final Score: | 45 | Cool article. I'm usually pretty biased toward UnNews articles since I love witty satire, but this was also just a very well written article. |
| Reviewer: | ~Minitrue Sir SysRq! Talk! Sex! =/ GUN • WotM • RotM • AotM • VFH • SK • PEEING • HP • BFF 23:42, 19 December 2007 (UTC) | |