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HowTo:Make money without getting a job[edit source]
Mainly looking for any other absurd money making scheme that wouldn't actually be classified as a job, opinion of the pictures; any suggestions at all, basically. --Dexter111344 15:15, 29 December 2007 (UTC)
- I don't feel like reviewing, but I have an idea for another scheme. You could challenge somebody to an obscene 1920's wager! Around the world in 80 days? Race across the sands of arabia? Either way, you need a picture a a guy with a curly mustache. - UnIdiot | | Talk | Contribs - 20:24, Dec 29
Humour: | 7 | Very good humor. But may I suggest the following ways to improve it even more?:
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Concept: | 10 | I still don't have a job! I've been getting by on allowances and birthday money for a long time! |
Prose and formatting: | 7 | Put a little more meat on each section's bones. They're looking a bit scrawny. Again be serious in tone with this. Notice how we all laugh at those commercials that tell you can get rich quick just by working at home? It's cause they are serious about it. So stop mocking the reader and sell your get rich quick scheme to them instead. |
Images: | 8 | Good images, could use a few more simple ones to balance it out. |
Miscellaneous: | 8 | avg'd it |
Final Score: | 40 | Good article. Ill be looking forward to seeing your changes. Ask me if you need any help. Since you know, I don't have a job.... |
Reviewer: | -- Sir Unknown U (Talk : Cont : VFH : PEE : CUN) 18:41, 30 December 2007 (UTC) |