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Article: Steve Irwin	Score: 12 animals
Nominated by:	Mattsnow 20:18, January 23, 2012 (UTC)
For: 12	Nom and for It was VFD and I totally rewrote it. Mattsnow 20:18, January 23, 2012 (UTC) I saw this as a work in progress, a page well worthy of Mr. Irwin, except for his stupidness and suicidal tendencies, leaving behind a young daughter and a hot wife, or vica versa. Aleister 20:12 23-1-'12  For. —Sir Socky (talk) (stalk) GUN SotM UotM PMotM UotY PotM WotM 20:38, 23 January 2012 For. ~Sir Frosty (Talk to me!) 20:28, January 24, 2012 (UTC) For Sir Ptok-BentonicznyPisz tutaj • KUN 13:18, January 26, 2012 (UTC) Ya sure T​K​F​​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​UU​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​CK 13:20, January 26, 2012 (UTC) I like it, though I feel like the cartoon at the end is unnecessary. -- Sir Xam Ralco the Mediocre 16:06, January 26, 2012 (UTC) For. Funnybony    20:57, Jan 26 20:57, January 26, 2012 (UTC)  For. I understand and I wish to continue. . 01:02, January 27, 2012 (UTC)  For. There are some weak parts, but overall a pretty good article. -- 03:53, January 27, 2012 (UTC)  Kill me with stingrays! |Si Plebius Dato' Joe ang Aussie CUN|IC Kill | 11:50, January 27, 2012 (UTC) For -- The Zombiebaron 19:39, January 27, 2012 (UTC)
Against: 0	No against votes
Comments	I like this article, but it feels more like a rough draft than a finished piece. What I mean is, it doesn't flow very well, like your other articles. It's good enough to go on the front page as is, but it could be better. Like the first quote, for example. The part after the tilde is funny, but it just sounds weird. I also have a problem with the first section after the intro, it's funny, but a little unrealistic (I know I must sound like a dick, but hear me out!). I think if it was based in reality more it would be funnier. I like the list of television episodes, but not the way you transition into them. That's what I'm talking about when I say the flow isn't right. And the last episode section felt like a missed opportunity for a great deal of humor. I would suggest just merging the death section with that one under the stingray header. Also, why not have any words under the legacy header? That could be funny! -- 04:09, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

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