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User:TheLedBalloon/UnNews[edit source]
Well, here's my latest UnNews. Whaddaya think? - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon 
(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 21:07, Dec 13
| Humour: | 7.5 | Pretty funny. A good laugh here or there. |
| Concept: | 6.9 | Alright concept. I'd rather an actual town name in Massachusetts than just "Boringplace." Possibilities: Ludlow, Orange, Freetown, Brewster, Rehoboth, Winchendon, Dighton, Chilmark, Aquinnah (formerly Gay Head until 1998), and my personal favorite, Cummington, which is best known for being the discovery point of a mineral named after the town, which bears the delightful name of "Cummingtonite." |
| Prose and formatting: | 7.9 | Good, but I'd like a bit better formatting, some more stylistic touches. Big blocks of text with no stylistic changes make me lose focus. Because I'm a jerk like that. |
| Images: | 8.3 | There are images, and they're good. Maybe move one to the left, though? |
| Miscellaneous: | 7.7 | Nothing to report. Averaged using Template:Pee. |
| Final Score: | 38.3 | Good! Very good. To be honest, most of these scores were fairly arbitrary. Sorry. |
| Reviewer: |  Contestant CUN -- VFH NotM Buzz Ctrbs 22:33, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
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