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My article needs to be reviewed before I mainspace it. The goal it to make it actually humorous instead of virulent like the original author intended. --Revolutionary, Anti-Bensonist, and TYATU Boss Uncyclopedian Meganew (Chat) (Care for a peek at my work?) (SUCK IT, FROGGY!) 01:34, November 24, 2012 (UTC)
User:Meganew/Shark Bite[edit source]
Revolutionary, Anti-Bensonist, and TYATU Boss Uncyclopedian Meganew (Chat) (Care for a peek at my work?) (SUCK IT, FROGGY!) 01:34, November 24, 2012 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | Few smiles, but no lols. |
| Concept: | 7 | OK, I will admit, I'm not too sure exactly what is going on! Is there actually a real drink of that name, or is it a new idea? |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | Generally it's OK, but I suggest you try reading it out loud to yourself and make sure that it all sounds right when you do that. I would also remove all mention of the well known Uncyc memes like Chuck and Benson. You know, all the ones we see all the time! |
| Images: | 5 | I like the top image, but the other one appears really kinda random to me. |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | Because I'm allowed to give whatever I like in this box! |
| Final Score: | 34 | I guess the problem is that I don't really know what this is about! Maybe I'm just old and... Old. Yea. That's it.
Anyway, I think if you removed the Uncyc specific stuff then we could mainspace this article no problem. |
| Reviewer: | MrN  03:02. Mar 16. 2013
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