Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnScripts:Harry Potter and the Inevitable Musical (once again)
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UnScripts:Harry Potter and the Inevitable Musical[edit source]
Am I allowed to review this one or will you shatter my heart and dash my good intentions on the floor like last time....? --vyvyan 00:28, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
- Yes. Please do. What do you mean "shatter my heart and dash my good intentions on the floor like last time"?-- barbarous Ape (masturbate) (Riot Porn) 17:43, 2 August 2007 (UTC)
I was going to review this one, but it's probably best not to voice my opinion on anything Harry Potter... 
artin ltimatalkcontribs 00:40, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | Even after reading this so many times now, I can still say it's funny stuff. |
| Concept: | 9 | This seems like a better idea than ever, especially since the rather disappointing last book. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | I still love the pitifulness of it all (Hagrid – You’re a wizard Harry! Chorus – He’s a wizard!). And the new quotes are a good addition. |
| Images: | 9 | Wow, these really become the article. A script doesn't exactly need pictures, but somehow these just make it so much better. |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | Perhaps instead of or in addition to the quotes at the top, you should have once more section at the end. This should be about the reaction and criticism of the musical from the Times and Rowling and whatnot. I think it would really complete the whole thing and add to its overall quality. |
| Final Score: | 38 | The article has really improved since you started it and I think it's very good. You've obviously put a lot of effort into it. Of course, you could still improve it (see my miscellaneous comment). Then again, there's room for improvement in everything :) Cheers on your accomplishment, |
| Reviewer: | vyvyan 02:18, 3 August 2007 (UTC) | |