Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Surprisium
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Surprisium[edit source]
The Bostonian, Turb0-Sunrise (LETS GO RED SOX) UHC 09:45, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | I like how the narrator of the article is being "surprised" by the surprisium as they're writing the article. There's also some good wordplay, such as the element of surprise being an actual element of the periodic table or "properties" and "chemical properties" being different headings. |
| Concept: | 9 | An article about the element of surprise, but it's a real element. I'd say that might be surprising in itself. |
| Prose and formatting: | 10 | Spelling and grammar check out, and it really sounds narrated in the first person but interrupted throughout. |
| Images: | 7 | That blood splatter picture at the end there is cool, and I don't know if there should be a better picture in the infobox or if it should just be left there. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | I feel like it could be expanded, and the part about the Boston Red Socks seems out of left field. (pun intended) |
| Final Score: | 39 | Overall a pretty ok article. Maybe each section could be expanded a little. |
| Reviewer: | --Fish on skates  21:05, 12 August 2025 (UTC)
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