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Emperor Taizong of Tang[edit]

This is my first article on Chinese Emperors, and more will definitely be coming soon. As Tang Taizong is less well known outside of China than other emperors, I just wanted to get a non-Chinese opinion to see if I explained the facts well. ~ HipponiasCUN Talk - Contribs - Articles  22:33, 30 October 2020 (UTC)

Humour: 7.5 It's funny to think about the Byzantines Skype-ing the Chinese, the "misread instructions," the noisy neighbors of Turks, and the sibling rivalry. Good, established funnies.
Concept: 8 I really like the "Arm Wrestling" theme of the Chinese Emperors and the assassination attempts "pranks". I feel that it could be expanded more into the section, as the "Xuanwu Gate" incident is more of a "random" machine gun/RPG thing.
Prose and formatting: 9 Formatting is almost perfect, but in my opinion the Infobox of the emperor should always be above the Wikipedia tag. (P.S: I had to go back and edit the formatting score. The formatting, at first glance, was so good that I thought you just linked a Wikipedia article.)
Images: 7 Nice shades, Mr. Taizong! I would try to edit the second image to make it funnier, as it's just a caption right now. I think an image of the Byzantine-Chinese Skype could be funnier.
Miscellaneous: 6.5 Miscellaneous score here. On a side note, this article probably would fall under the Codeine's Mum problem (not deleted, just... never heard of them before), but since the Emperor of China is such a historical figure, I think that could be excused.
Final Score: 38 Nice article!
Reviewer: -WohMi, the best damn duelist on this website (talk) 16:15, 12 February 2021 (UTC)

@WohMi: Thanks for the review. The image of the Tibetans is edited. Don't you notice how short they are? I've shrunk them to 60% size to demonstrate my potatochopping skills the Emperor's greatness. I'll try to make an image of the Skype session. ~ HipponiasCUN Talk - Contribs - Articles  16:46, 12 February 2021 (UTC)

... You mean they're not normally that short? -WohMi, the best damn duelist on this website (talk) 19:44, 12 February 2021 (UTC)