Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Battle of Shiroyama
Battle of Shiroyama[edit source]
This is mean to be a far briefer article than most, as it is summarizing a rather brief battle in history, with some comedic flavor. Please review it as such. I do plan on making edits to this post-review, but as of now I've got the meat and potatoes in it, and got it to a nice stopping point. Cheers.
--Товарищ Rooomy of the Soviet Union (Yell at me ~ Woo) 12:34, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | Right on the spot. Never heard of the battle before, but the article goes into the battle informatively and with humour. The letters were funny, and the samurai "who didn't expect the enemies to attack them" made me laugh pretty hard. |
| Concept: | 7 | The battle could have been a dull choice of topic, but it's well written and funny. The article is informative, yet it's interesting and funny at the same time. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | The broken infobox makes the page look a bit ugly, but I'm sure that will be fixed in the near future. |
| Images: | 8 | Non-edited images but captions are very well-written and funny. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | This could definitely be featured/on the Japanese history syllabus. |
| Final Score: | 37 | Great article! |
| Reviewer: | ~ HipponiasCUN - Talk - Contribs - Articles 18:28, 18 April 2021 (UTC) | |
oh Jesus Christ how did the infobox get fucked up- I think someone was fucking with infoboxes over the weekend and that's how it got all fucked up --Товарищ Rooomy of the Soviet Union (Yell at me ~ Woo) 11:56, 19 April 2021 (UTC)
fixed infbox; Originally I had used the infobox from wikipedia but after some rummaging I found a regular battle infobox that did the same job, thank fuck --Товарищ Rooomy of the Soviet Union (Yell at me ~ Woo) 12:04, 19 April 2021 (UTC)