UnBooks talk:Now That You Are Almost a Woman
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UnBooks:Now That You Are Almost a Woman [edit source]
I tried to write this as it would have been written in the 1950s - sorta like the basis for my mother being so fucked up. Constructive and helpful criticisms welcomed. Dame 
GUN PotY WotM 2xPotM 17xVFH VFP Poo PMS •YAP• 01:31, 17 May 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | As I stated many times, I rather enjoying smart irony than sheer sarcasm. |
| Concept: | 10 | Clever satire of the oft-fantasized 50s. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Almost there with the motherly prose, drifts a little at the religious parts. |
| Images: | 8 | 50's what else? |
| Miscellaneous: | 9 | Already VFH grade. |
| Final Score: | 43 | She-humor, maybe a girl could enjoy this even more. |
| Reviewer: | herr doktor needsAV2  [scream!] 01:45, 17 May 2007 (UTC)
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Ze Doktor beat me to it by a nose!
| Humour: | 8 | Excellent! It's mostly sly-chuckle-inducing rather that laugh out loud funny, but there's nothing wrong with that. Very witty! |
| Concept: | 10 | Painfully close to the truth. An interesting follow |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | Lucid, readable prose; I didn't proof read closely, but I didn't see any obvious speeling problems, or with and the grammar difficulties of. |
| Images: | 8 | Well chosen images with excellent captions. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | A well chosen subject for satire, and well executed. |
| Final Score: | 43 | An interesting follow up might be the seventies version (don't be uptight) and the modern version (starve yourself thin) of this sort of book. Just a thought. |
| Reviewer: | --Cap'n Sir Ben GUN WotM VFH VFP 01:55, 17 May 2007 (UTC) | |
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Semi-protect[edit source]
Seriously, this needs protection. --Starnestommy (Talk • Contribs • FFS • WP) 23:45, 21 May 2007 (UTC)
- Nah, it's just the mega-wanker Gayson Kumbaya. He will vandalize anything we put at the front page. I have a bot tailor-fit for him, if just Mhaille gave me enough time to activate it. But Mhaille too ninja. -- SckrTrckrBot 23:47, 21 May 2007 (UTC)