Talk:Lying
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Pure genius in four paragraphs!
--Jimmy Jazz 7th May, 2006
Wow. Wow.
--MorningSciFi 23:27, 18 June 2006 (UTC)
From Pee Review[edit source]
I found the article Lying on the VFD page and decided to take it on as a "pet project". It has been rewritten - Todd Lyons, Zombiebarron, Mhaille and Braydie have looked it over. I am seeking constructive help on punching it up. It would be helpful if the reviewer is critical to provide a bit more of a comment than "this section doesn't work" - I would like to know why it doesn't work so that I can improve it in the correct fashion and any helpful suugestions on how to make it better. Dame GUN PotY WotM 2xPotM 17xVFH VFP Poo PMS •YAP• 16:32, 21 January 2007 (UTC)
The non sequiter links are overdone --Kelpan 22:59, 27 February 2007 (UTC)
Humour: | 7 | I agree with Kelpan - too many non sequiters spoilt the broth. |
Concept: | 8 | I liked the idea of an Uncyclopedian article on lying; it'd be like Honesty. |
Prose and formatting: | 7 | No mistakes I could spot, yet the set out wasn't too good. |
Images: | 5 | Maybe too random. |
Miscellaneous: | 4 | Speaking as an Australian, we would NEVER want Steve Bastard Irwin as Prime Minister. I strongly object to being a)given a stereotype like Steve Irwin and b)getting such a clot as him for Prime Minister. We thought Howard was bad. |
Final Score: | 31 | Alright, not great. |
Reviewer: | Ikabu 05:53, 21 March 2007 (UTC) |