Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:MacMania/UnScripts:Good Cop Inanimate Cop
Jump to navigation
Jump to search
User:MacMania/UnScripts:Good Cop Inanimate Cop[edit source]
Don't ask me how I got the idea. 
Sir MacMania GUN—[15:50 13 Aug 2010]
| Humour: | 9 | I was laughing out loud at many of the parts in this script. It was so funny and as a guy whose watched a lot of Bruce Willis and cop movies this was a home run. I think I would have liked the characters to be a little less self aware about the situation. When I first skimmed through it I thought that Bruce and the Lego would be friends and he'd value his service but maybe its better that you made him useless like a real lego toy would be and while at times the whole knowing it was a movie got a little old there was so much great humor surrounding it I didnt care. I loved the part about how the streets of New York were just empty enough for a chase scene. The whole recurring character with the "hey don't wake people up while they are sleeping" was just a bit too cheesy for me and the thing keeping you from a 9.5 in humor. But honestly this was hilarious from start to finish. |
| Concept: | 8.5 | Spoofing Hollywood cliches is nothing new but your message of product placement and satire of just the whole genre was spot on and enjoyable to read. Writing it out as a script really gave it that extra boost so I give you a big thumbs up there. This could be a really funny "Funny or Die" sketch. |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | Well done read like a script and had very nice little hidden extras such as hoovering over some of the blue links like when the chief says "do you want the good news or bad news?" and good is really a link to "lies" and bad a link to "truth" stuff like that is just great uncyclopedia writing and I really liked how you did it. |
| Images: | 10 | Great images, I love the poster and all of the pics of Bruce with the Lego. Also really loved the last picture of the LEGO being carried off in a stretcher at the end. All of this really added to the article's humor and flow. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8.5 | Decepticons lol classic! |
| Final Score: | 45 | This article is feature ready, I say give it a shot. |
| Reviewer: | --Dr. Fenwick 22:07, August 18, 2010 (UTC) | |