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UnNews:Israeli frisbee lands in Gaza Strip[edit source]
I hope you like this article. Well, you better...as long as you wanna keep your right hand.
--The Hunt 
A dash of Dickensian 
07:07, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | Though there were no really funny, "LOL" moments, the article was consistently amusing throughout. Good. |
| Concept: | 9 | Very good concept. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | OK prose and formatting, but the 1st sentence of the article is a bit of a run-on. Also, the first paragraph is rather lengthy, so you may want to split that into two separate paragraphs to make it easier to read. |
| Images: | 8 | Your image is good, though the caption could probably be funnier. You don't need another pic, but if you want to add another one, you very easily could. It's up to you, really. |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | N/A |
| Final Score: | 41 | In all, a solid addition to UnNews |
| Reviewer: | P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon  (Tick Tock) (Contribs) 20:47, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
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