Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnBooks:Backstreet Abortionist's Handbook (2)
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UnBooks:Backstreet Abortionist's Handbook[edit source]
-- flaccid Ape (break) (Riot Porn) 21:11, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
His eminence, the Marquis de Nofu, Major Ggarfield, GUN, MUN, and tons of fun is reviewing this piss--
Major'GUN' Ggarfield, Le Marquis de Nofu .Complex! 23:43, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | Ahhh! Funny, satirical, and just plan scary. The truth actually is scaring than nonsense. Let's lighten this up a bit. How about we add something absurd to, say, the "methods" portion. Perhaps the "M-80" method, or the shaken soda can method. I mean, some of the stuff you had there was pretty wicked, and I don't even have a vagina. Also, change George Cloony to Julia Roberts because she sucks way more. Plz? |
| Concept: | 8 | I am guessing this could be pretty funny if you take a certain stance, or go for the absurd with the underlying message that moral message that abortions need to be legalized to protect our daughters from crackpots. I think that is what you were shooting for, right? Of course, don't say it, but make them think it. Idk. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Does anyone really know what prose is? I think I do, but I change my mind. Oh well, the writing is fine, but not brilliant. I would like to see longer and more brilliant. Grammar was mostly fine. |
| Images: | 6.5 | That's pretty good, but not like wonderful or anything. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | Could be going places some day soon. This baby needs beefin' up. Perhaps it is a little too tasteless right now? Again, hot coffee down the hole, something absurd, anything to liven up the methods. Oh, and perhaps something about misleading receptionists, interior decoration for the office, and phony credentials? |
| Final Score: | 34.5 | Please look at Misc. for the final say. I gess I did it there, stupid me. >_< |
| Reviewer: | --Major'GUN' Ggarfield, Le Marquis de Nofu .Complex! 00:02, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
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