Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Trogdor the Burninator
Trogdor the Burninator[edit source]
A rewrite for Conservation Week. —Sir Guildensternenstein 20:29, 12 April 2009 (UTC)
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Everyone back off, this one's mine.--
Smokin' Cheddar BBQ: The King of the Triangular Snackfoods 23:13, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8.25 | Don't know why, but I like to break this down, like so.
Intro-I like it so far. The only suggestion is to make sure it doesn't drag on, if ya know what I mean. Get some attention-grabbers. This reads like a textbook, and while that is a funny concept, I personally don't like to read textbooks. The Poem- I see you have heard the Trogdor song.I like how you translated it into whatever-the-fuck-that-language-is-I-can't-remember. This section honestly made me LQTS quite a few times, but maybe it's because I've listened to this song so many times. (It's a classic) Good to see it move away from the textbook a bit here. The only suggestion for here is to expand the actual poem a tiny bit. HotM- Very funny. The whole "Trogdor creted Internet humor" thing was original. Some reason, this isn't quite as funny as the last section, but it's still very funny. Just look at it, and if you can come up with something, great, if not, its cool. Beowulf- I'm a bit confused about the quote. It's very funny, but something about just... I don't know. It's a bit... okay, I'm not sure I understand the Trogdor-Internet thing and what exactly relates it to Beowulf like that. The paragraph is fine, a little short, but fine. It's just the quote... look over it... I'm a little slow (only a 428 IQ) so I might be missing it a bit. Anyways, still funny. |
| Concept: | 8.75 | Honestly a great concept. Maybe I am a little generous with the ratings, so be it. I'll admit I do enjoy the somewhat cheesy humor of the Strong BAd shit, and this fits right along with it. Original. Great. Big fucking surprise. |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | Very good. Couldn't find any spelling or grammar errors. However, look at the wording of the Chapman quote. it seems like it may be written incorrectly, with the dashes and things, I'm not sure, but check it. otherwise, is nice. |
| Images: | 6.75 | I do love the 3 images you have now. The textures on them look great. The only changes I might make are to rough up the edges a bit. Ya know, some tears or burns, to make it look a little more worn. Did you make the images yourself, cause if you did, I hate you, cause I suck at the Shopping. I would add in a 4th picture too. At the bottom, to the left of the Beowulf section, I would put one of the following:
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| Miscellaneous: | 8.25 | I hate this section. It needs to die of a horrible burninating. It's a good article. Yada yada. Blah blah blah. Nothing to be said. |
| Final Score: | 41 | Once again, an extremely, almost impossibly, well-written article by Guildensternenstein (that's right bitch, I can spell your full name, without looking, ha). Chalk it up with the rest of your millions of artcile feats. I don't think you can be considered a n00b if you have a Master's degree in literature. Bottom line, you did amazing again, you suck, and I hate you. Talk to ya later, buddy. |
| Reviewer: | Smokin' Cheddar BBQ: The King of the Triangular Snackfoods 23:51, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
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