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Hurricane Harvey

This has more of my original "taste", made in September 2020. It got 29 on the original PeeReview-but I have made fixes since then. Don't forget to review my other articles on PeeReview, Interstate 98 an Interstate 94, and Hurricane Irma included! And the Northeast blizzard UnNews one. Gale5050 complain about me! And see my Wikipedia contributions! 01:14, 6 February 2021 (UTC)

Humour:	4.5	Looking over the Humor, it seems you definitely worked on it. However, the pool joke is frequent enough that it's unfunny, yet not frequent enough that it's ironically funny. I enjoy the US trying to sue Hurricane Harvey, and the Houston-Rape joke. (I assume you're talking about Señor Weinstein).
Concept:	7	I mean, it's a Hurricane. So unless something really zany/wacky happens, it's just the same-old "big wind-&-water make damage." I'm sure you can put a good twist on it though!
Prose and formatting:	8	Pretty decent. My biggest problem currently is that the map of Harvey's path creates a big, ugly gap in the middle of the page. I was looking through the code to try to edit that out, but I couldn't find it. Fix that, and you'll be good.
Images:	4	There are no funnies in the images. This may be because I'm biased (in that I've seen the hurricane pool joke at least 8 times), but pictures of the actual devastation aren't funny, at least not to me.
Miscellaneous:	4	Gale, in my opinion, your biggest editing flaw is that you insert quite a bit of Wikipedia links in most of your articles, and this one is no different. It kind of ruins the whole "Uncyclopedia funny" when you're directed to an unfunny Wikipedia article. Also, DON'T BE DISCOURAGED AND DELETE THIS ARTICLE!!! Looking over other people's Pee Review, I realize that I Pee Review a little bit harsher than everyone else. This isn't a bad article (in fact it's better than it was before), it's just not good either. Definitely has some room for improvement. Maybe I'll help out. Good luck!
Final Score:	27.5	You're definitely getting better, Gale. One day, I'm sure you'll be the best Hurricane/Cyclone/Typhoon Creator in the land.
Reviewer:	-WohMi, the best damn duelist on this website (talk) 02:07, 6 February 2021 (UTC)

wow, WohMi, quickest peereview ever! (53 minutes) Gale5050 complain about me! And see my Wikipedia contributions! 02:08, 6 February 2021 (UTC)

And no, I am not discouraging. Dorian got a 19, so I moved it to my userspace. I will work on it if/when I have time. Eloise got a poor concept, thats why I deleted it. Occasional links to WP are fine, but I'll remove some. Gale5050 complain about me! And see my Wikipedia contributions! 02:10, 6 February 2021 (UTC)