Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Everybody blames me
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Everybody blames me[edit source]
Grr... Give this 50 points for everything or I will kill y00. --Sir General Minister G5 FIYC UPotM [Y] #21 F@H KUN 07:44, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7.5 | A few funny lines, but could definitely be funnier. |
| Concept: | 8 | Alright concept, a little in-jokey |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Nothing fancy, no complaints, except for a couple weird sentences, which seem ok anyway because the page is written from the perspective of someone pleading a case on the dump or something. |
| Images: | 7 | Average images. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8.5 | As an uncyclopedian, I like the page. I'm only worried that people not from the site won't get it as much. |
| Final Score: | 39 | I'd focus on adding more jokes. If you throw enough shit at a wall, some of it will stick. Then you get out your shuvel and clean up everything that doesn't. Adding more is what I recommend for this page, as there really isn't too much extraneous crap in it. Then go through it and delete what you don't like. After that, just rinse and repeat. For best results, use with UN:HTBFANJS(just to get ideas). |
| Reviewer: | P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon  (Tick Tock) (Contribs) 03:02, 15 June 2007 (UTC) (sorry, not quite 50, but maybe with a bit more work.......)
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