Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Caboose (Red vs. Blue)
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Caboose [edit source]
An article i did that took me a while to release. link here. Indepth. Thanks!
WILL
YOU 333 11:21, December 23, 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | Well... So short article about such a fascinating character. Caboose is stupid but well,,, you put that much presshure one teh missphelingsh and his sthupidity taht it smees is't a summary of a character. But well written, with images... but humor is quite infantile. There is too many gay referrences. You should be more creative man. Invent something unusual, not just obvious jokes. |
| Concept: | 7 | Decent concept. Does it need a genius to summary funny, retarded character in such a way? No. It's quite obvious. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Ok with the misspellings but...mhmhm... Oh well, let it be. Decent formating of the short article. But last part is ...bleh. I didn't like it. Too retarded. It went over boundary of so retarded that it became dull. Make it 'shorter or change it to be actually funny. |
| Images: | 7 | I guess you couldn't find better images. Well, then decent. That's all I can say. 2 pictures are enough for the article but they are not rocking, you now (but the first one is better than the second; try to change the second if possible, if not keep it as it is). |
| Miscellaneous: | 6.8 | It's a decent article. Not great, not bad but not worth featuring I think. |
| Final Score: | 33.8 | score says everything but it's not 42 |
| Reviewer: |  Sir Ptok-BentonicznyPisz tutaj • KUN 18:38, December 24, 2009 (UTC)
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