| Humour:
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5
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Too many memes. In the first section alone, I found the following memes: Nobody cares, Communist China, Maozilla, OWNED, and others.
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| Concept:
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6
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You have a good concept going, but you need to improve in its consistency.
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| Prose and formatting:
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3
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This, I felt, was the biggest problem. I saw poorly used headers, underscores, and grey box areas out to Wazoo. You may need to perform some major janitorial work.
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| Images:
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10
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n/a
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| Miscellaneous:
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8
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At least I liked the Ranks and Orders template.
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| Final Score:
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32
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My biggest advice is that you fix the formatting. It will make it easier on the eyes and the people will be more likely to read your article from start to finish.
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| Reviewer:
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General Insineratehymn 05:19, 11 February 2007 (UTC)
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actually, who are they? GSPbeetle complains Vandalisms 14:28, 1 September 2006 (UTC)
