User:Frosty/NOWC/judging/Frosty

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House of Hangover[edit | edit source]

Humour - Score: 6/10 Comment: Some good stuff in here but some of it is overly predictable and quite often the joke is just too bizarre to be funny such as "several champagne bottles,all full of semen." There is not a lot funny in being so overly bizarre in that particular case. Some of this is just too dry and some is too wild. A balance needs to be hit better than it has.
Concept - Score: 8/10 Comment: Alright you pulled off the pun reasonably well, just when you float away into barely avoiding stupity that it lets you down. For instance that "Fuck America" bit could be pulled off better than it has.
Originality - Score: 7/10 Comment: Oddly no-one has thought to develop the idea of an entire article based off this kind of idea but it's fair to say that you are not the first to portray a royal family as a bunch of fat drunk rich people. It's reasonably original but the way you have gone about it isn't exactly new.
Formatting - Score: 9/10 Comment: It's pretty well formatted, would be 10 except for that one red link, I like to see galleries centred and images left at thumb size is a bit ugly in my personal view but then again to make them bigger you need more content.
Images - Score: 8/10 Comment: I like the images except the first one seeing as you have taken an existing badge and just added stuff around it. You could have just modified the original to include pictures of alcohol instead of adding to it the way you have
Total - Score: 38/50 Comment: Boner.

UnNews:Leprechauns support Obama[edit | edit source]

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The Hawaiian conquest of Wales[edit | edit source]

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Cthulhu Tequila[edit | edit source]

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Giovanni Battista Bugatti[edit | edit source]

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UnPoetia:Ode to Cthulhu[edit | edit source]

Humour - Score: 9/10 Comment: This made me seriously lol in several cases. Good job, only complain is that it was tragically too short. But being a poem and all that can't really be helped.
Concept - Score: 10/10 Comment: You grasped your concept pretty well in my opinion
Originality - Score: 7/10 Comment: Definitely something different. But as I'll explain further on your choice of image wasn't really that original...
Formatting - Score: 6/10 Comment: This needs some links to other articles man! Also the image could be better formatted with the text as a caption in the thumb insteado over the image
Images - Score: 6/10 Comment: Sorry but that "Ceiling X is watching you Y" joke has been done like 50,000 times before. Something original and actually funny!
Total - Score: 38/50 Comment: Very good, just work on the images and links please.